Fic: Clumsy

[princess_mog]

Title: Clumsy
Rating: PG
Pairing: Much/Allan
Spoilers: Series 3
Summary: Much feels clumsy and in the way at the camp so he leaves, but someone follows him and proves that he's not as clumsy as he thinks.

Comments

[thestorymaker]

Welcome to the comm! And what a fabulous fic to introduce yourself with!

Poor old Much, I feel sorry for him a lot this season, and the one person who seems to be giving him any time of day is Allan, which I thought we'd never see happen!

This was a great fic and I love how you exampled everyone as having a 'role' whereas Much seems bereft. I think it's fair to say that if he weren't around the general running of the camp and outlaws would fall apart yet none of them realise it!

Look forward to reading more of your fics xx

[princess_mog]

Thank you. I'm glad I've finally found a group of people who share my love of Much :)

[princess_mog]

Thanks...I love the fact that Much is so shy and Allan so cocky. They work perfectly together.

[rochvelleth]

Oh, this was so sweet! Poor Much! (I have to say, I know exactly how he feels, actually - maybe that's why I love him so much!) I really enjoyed this, it was lovely.

And welcome to the community - I'm looking forward to reading more of your work!

[princess_mog]

Thanks. I shall get right back to writing more Much fic!

[shaman_whore]

Welcome to the community!
Naww, poor clumsy Much! I like that you've got the two noobs all angry and mean but Allan and John a bit more understanding.
hahaha on Tuck's enormous head! And awww, that was gorgeous! I like how Much didn't have a purpose for Allan in the group initially either, and that Allan didn't mind being knocked down by Much.
An excellent fic, look forward to reading more of your work! xx

[princess_mog]

I meant that Tuck's head is huge figuratively but I've been watching series 3 on iplayer and it actually is huge! Thanks for commentage. xx

[kalsippis]

Poor Much. But I'd say being a bit clumsy is worth it means Allan will comfort you with kisses...*looks for things to knock over*
Great fic, and welcome to the community!

[princess_mog]

Indeed, if that is what being clumsy means then i never want to be graceful! Thanks :)