Comments | treatallanright: InterComm: Full of Surprises

traveller_19 in treatallanright

InterComm: Full of Surprises

Feb 22, 2011 01:29

Title: Full of Surprises
Author: Traveller
Word Count: 1,060
Rating: G
Characters/Pairings: Allan, Guy, mentions Marian
Spoilers/Warnings: Shameless fluff.
Summary: Allan is under the weather, Guy tries to be kind. Awkwardness and fluff ensue.
Disclaimer: Even if I did make a profit from this, what would be the point? Allan would just claim the credit, ( Read more... )

rating: g, char: allan, intercomm2011, cat: short fic (1001-5000 words), char: guy

Comments 20

Beta Credit traveller_19 February 22 2011, 07:40:48 UTC

Because I forgot to do it again. *facepalm* I think it's because I'm so new to LJ that I'm just focused so hard on trying not to screw up my posting that I forget to credit in the text. So...

Thank you to LadyKate63 for the beta! *hugs*

Re: Beta Credit ladykate63 February 22 2011, 08:30:50 UTC

Aw, thanks! :-) It was a pleasure (and I love the fic!). You can just edit the entry, just so you know. :D

Re: Beta Credit traveller_19 February 23 2011, 06:31:49 UTC

I need to figure out how to edit the entry without messing it up... I forgot the italics! Eek!

thymelady February 22 2011, 10:12:09 UTC

LOL! They're so adorable that it's silly! And vice versa! ;-D Loved it!

traveller_19 February 23 2011, 06:32:26 UTC

Teehee, thanks! Aren't they? ;)

secretchord February 22 2011, 17:14:09 UTC

lolololol I was cringing throughout this fic because it is just that awkward. Poor Guy! You nailed Allan's voice here. Funny and cute and fluffy and perfect!

traveller_19 February 23 2011, 06:36:29 UTC

Perfect? *blinks* *blushes* Thank you!

Guy's awkwardness is a bit cringe-worthy, isn't it? I tried to take some of the vibes I got in watching his scenes with Marian (the ones where he's not a complete creeper, that is... lol!) and apply them in a more platonic manner to his interactions with Allan. And it makes me feel really good to hear you say you think I nailed Allan's voice. As much time as I spend with him in my head, it's hard to get him right. Probably because I'm such a descriptive writer and he's so...blunt. Lol!

BTW, I LOVE your icon. *Dies of LOLZ*

ladykate63 February 23 2011, 08:35:45 UTC

And when are you going to get an icon? ;)

traveller_19 February 23 2011, 23:31:30 UTC

When I decide which amazingly gorgeous and adorable picture of Allan I want to use. ;)

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traveller_19 February 23 2011, 06:38:17 UTC

I know which one *I* want to hug the most. I am, after all, the co-chairperson of the Hugs For Allan Committee. ;) I'm sure Guy would happily receive your hugs, though. (If you took a Polyjuice Potion and dressed up to look like Marian, that is. :D )

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Re: Hoarse traveller_19 February 23 2011, 23:31:45 UTC

Thanks for the tip! :)