Flash Fic: First Review
Title: First Review
Author: mideltone_one
Word Count: 295
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: Allan, Will
Spoilers/Warnings: Slash
Summary: Allan gives feedback
Disclaimer:The Robin Hood characters written about here belong to Tiger Aspect and the British Broadcasting Corporation. All Rights Reserved. No copyright infringement is intended nor is any money being made. I don't own them - if I did I'd be too busy drooling to write! All mistakes are mine.
"Well?"
Allan slumped back against the tree, shocked into silence. It was only after a couple of deep breaths that he could string a few words together, "Wow! Just ... let me ... give me a moment.” Slowly but surely feeling flowed back into his hands and feet. When their lips had touched his world had collapsed into their mouths, his head spinning as it was swamped with arousing sensations.
"Was it any good?"
Allan nodded. "Yes, very good, much better than I expected.”
“I wasn’t too forceful?”
Memories of that tongue sliding past his teeth, entwining itself around him, stopped him for a moment. When his mind cleared he answered, “No, no … just right.”
“And I wasn’t too sloppy?”
Subconsciously his tongue slid across his lips, picking up tiny droplets of saliva that had been created in another’s mouth, transferring the taste to his head, making his heart race.
“Absolutely fine,” he managed to say, willing his body to come back under his control, whilst loving the way it felt.
“Thanks for letting me practise,” said Will, stepping back, “I’m much less worried about kissing Djaq now.”
Allan’s heart sank to his boots. It made no sense that he suddenly felt such loss, when he’d never really had anything in the first place, but logical thinking didn’t make the pain go away. As he watched the young carpenter disappear into the forest, en route to the camp and Djaq, he knew the only way he’d ever have the love of this boy for himself would be if she rejected his advances. But that would hurt his young friend, and he felt too much for Will to do that to him. He loved him, but his friend could never know; he would have to let him go.
Author: mideltone_one
Word Count: 295
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: Allan, Will
Spoilers/Warnings: Slash
Summary: Allan gives feedback
Disclaimer:The Robin Hood characters written about here belong to Tiger Aspect and the British Broadcasting Corporation. All Rights Reserved. No copyright infringement is intended nor is any money being made. I don't own them - if I did I'd be too busy drooling to write! All mistakes are mine.
"Well?"
Allan slumped back against the tree, shocked into silence. It was only after a couple of deep breaths that he could string a few words together, "Wow! Just ... let me ... give me a moment.” Slowly but surely feeling flowed back into his hands and feet. When their lips had touched his world had collapsed into their mouths, his head spinning as it was swamped with arousing sensations.
"Was it any good?"
Allan nodded. "Yes, very good, much better than I expected.”
“I wasn’t too forceful?”
Memories of that tongue sliding past his teeth, entwining itself around him, stopped him for a moment. When his mind cleared he answered, “No, no … just right.”
“And I wasn’t too sloppy?”
Subconsciously his tongue slid across his lips, picking up tiny droplets of saliva that had been created in another’s mouth, transferring the taste to his head, making his heart race.
“Absolutely fine,” he managed to say, willing his body to come back under his control, whilst loving the way it felt.
“Thanks for letting me practise,” said Will, stepping back, “I’m much less worried about kissing Djaq now.”
Allan’s heart sank to his boots. It made no sense that he suddenly felt such loss, when he’d never really had anything in the first place, but logical thinking didn’t make the pain go away. As he watched the young carpenter disappear into the forest, en route to the camp and Djaq, he knew the only way he’d ever have the love of this boy for himself would be if she rejected his advances. But that would hurt his young friend, and he felt too much for Will to do that to him. He loved him, but his friend could never know; he would have to let him go.