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railise January 2 2010, 18:27:20 UTC
OMG, I LOVE this!!! :) :) :) I'm dying to know who "She" is...

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omteddy2006 January 2 2010, 22:20:19 UTC
Not telling.

(cuz I don't really know...)

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robinfanatic January 2 2010, 19:36:34 UTC
Wonderful! Absolutely wonderful!

Had his lordship not seen the size of their leader?
ROTFLMAO! Now...if my mind were truly in the gutter...which it's not of course...but let's not go there.

I love your descriptions of rodent and weasel face and Roy!! YAY!!

And I think we need to know more about this honestly-earned ha' penny!

Great job!

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omteddy2006 January 2 2010, 22:23:27 UTC
And I think we need to know more about this honestly-earned ha' penny!

The plot bunnies were absolutely stupefied by that one! *scratches head*

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jagnikjen January 2 2010, 19:57:43 UTC
Great job, omteddy2006. I like this bit of fleshing out of this scene.

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omteddy2006 January 2 2010, 22:23:59 UTC
Thank you. I always wondered what made Allan stay at the beginning.

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hippie_girl_31 January 2 2010, 21:24:35 UTC
Allan would have liked to beat the sarcasm right out of him, the cheeky sod!

Yeah, lol, I can see how sarcasm and cheekiness wouldn't be the sort of character traits Allan would appreciate in someone else.

She had said that he could not work an honest day’s labor. He had proven her wrong.

My mind is spinning with thoughts of this mystery woman who could get him to put in an honest day's work. She must have been some woman.

Great job! I love how much more value Allan placed on the coin because he'd earned it honestly. Just when I think I've got him figured out, there's more.

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omteddy2006 January 2 2010, 22:22:24 UTC
If I knew what kind of woman could turn Allan A' Dale into an honest, hard-working man, I would write a "Mary Sue Manifesto" unlike any the world has ever read.

Thankfully, she's a mystery even to me.

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wastingyourgum January 2 2010, 22:09:01 UTC
So how many times did you have to restart your brain after that sixth word? ;)

Brilliant missing scene. I too am dying of curiosity about this mysterious "She". And what a good reason for Allan to be galled by the loss of that particular ha'penny.

Loved the descriptions of Forest, Hanton and Roy as well!

At least, he had not lost his trousers in the deal.
To my mind this says that Allan is totally checking out Much's legs... Your mileage may vary.

with only the forest to protect and arm them
Good job Sherwood Forest has the rare Bow'n'Arrow tree growing in it! Or was Much concealing that one somewhere?

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omteddy2006 January 2 2010, 22:19:35 UTC
Re: sixth word...My brain gets snagged even now as I re-read it!

Or was Much concealing that one somewhere?
Ah...Much's trousers...they conceal so many mysterious things. That's why they had to take them. If they had just probed further, they would have found his bow and arrow stash!

And, I'll stop there.

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