Cold Case: Over the Edge (Canon | Jimmy/Coop | PG-13 | 304)

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Title: Over the Edge
Date written: 01/11/06
Word count: 304
Rating/Warnings: PG-13, none.
Characters/Pairing: Jimmy/Coop.
Genres/Plot summary: Canon. The scene that Jimmy’s wife sees, from Coop’s point of view.

Author’s Note: For amdaz and melissasjack. :) And if you’re a Brokeback fan who hasn’t seen this episode (that’s a link to the Wikipedia article) of

Comments

Genius !!

[amdaz]

Dang sweet girl you're awesomely gifted.

"Your heart is beating in panic against your chest-what if he…how can I explain… just need… just need him-and you’re trying to find words, words that will make sense of this, make it okay again, because you don’t know what you’d do if things weren’t okay between the two of you-God, Jimmy- "

You so perfectly captured the moment.
Thank you !
Most brilliant!

Re: Genius !!

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Thank you so much, Dean!

Very glad that you enjoyed this, and I'll admit that I'm even glad you talked me into writing it because I have been thinking about writing these two since I watched the episode but just never found a good reason, ya know? Anyway--I haven't forgotten about your crossover, either. That one will take a bit more thought, thought, so it's in the incubator right now. :)

Love you, thank you, you, rock, and I am sooo Happy!!!!!

[melissasdavid]

Gah!!!!!!!

LOve it, love you for doing this!!!!!!!
I love it, and YOU KNOW I never care about anything non BBM related, cept this so is...
Oh, the aching worry and sweetness of finding out that your not the only one, that you can fall together...
Thank you, sheera, love...
beautiful, short and poignant...
as always your writing is amazing.
LOVE YOU
Me

Re: Love you, thank you, you, rock, and I am sooo Happy!!!!!

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LOL, what about that movie you were telling me about? Pretty soon you'll have me slashing all kinds of stuff, hehehe. Although I will admit these two I already did want to, you just happened to give me a good excuse... ^_^

So glad you enjoyed this, dear. Especially since this isn't a style I write in often, but for this piece it felt right.

LOVE YOU MORE!

^_^

[jacksharmonica]

He’s stepped forward and you’re lost, falling, plummeting into the unknown.

But when his hands twine into your hair and his lips find yours, you know it won’t be alone.

Gahhh, Intense, breathtaking, desperate, heartbreaking!
Gorgeous writing as always. Thank you, loved this ♥

tara

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Thank you so much, dear! I especially appreciate the comment since I'm always a little apprehensive to write a new pairing--so glad you enjoyed it! :)

[lolitaray]

This is just beautiful...absolutely breathtaking. I especially love Coop's inner reflections as it is all going on.

Just as good as the clip itself. :)

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Oh, thank you! I had no ambitions to measure up to that clip (yoooowza and a half)--so flattered that you think I did :)

[chvickers]

Not only can I imagine this going through Coop's mind; after reading it, I can't imagine anything else going through his mind. You captured it so - well, elegantly isn't a word for such rough emotions, but that's the first word that comes to mind.

His realization shakes the reader like a thunderclap.

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Wow, thank you so much. I must say that inhabiting that frame of mind isn't really my norm, since I don't have a thought process like that, so it's really awesome to hear that I captured it for you.

Thanks so much for your kind words! :) They're especially wonderful to hear since I get a little worried when I write a new pairing.

(Oh, and pssst--did you see they have a B/OB prompt at the Porn Battle? I haven't looked through the responses yet but I'm hoping at least one person will pick up that one ^_^ I'm thinking about doing it, actually, too.)