Comments | trascendenza: Psych: We'll Share a Seat on the Train (Gus/Shawn, PG, ~3,700 words)

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Psych: We'll Share a Seat on the Train (Gus/Shawn, PG, ~3,700 words)

Nov 11, 2009 03:10

Gus/Shawn, PG, ~3,700 words.
Gus finally figures out why he watched The Lost Boys so many times. Written for the commentathon prompt "go on a date with me."

"I am not bisexual, Shawn, don't even play ( Read more... )

*writing, *writing: fic, =psych, =psych: fic

Comments 31

vampirespider November 11 2009, 14:18:29 UTC

Awww, that was lovely & your voices are absolutely spot-on.

trascendenza November 11 2009, 18:24:49 UTC

Aww, thank you so much. Since this fic is almost entirely composed of dialogue I'm really glad to hear the voices work! <3

saavikam77 November 11 2009, 18:18:43 UTC

Awww!! XD Totally adorable, and so very THEM. ^____^

*applauds*

trascendenza November 11 2009, 18:27:42 UTC

Aww, thank you! I'm so glad to hear it. <3333

kaizoku November 12 2009, 03:50:06 UTC

Hilarious and sweet! God, I love them and I've only watched one or two episodes of Psych. :-)

trascendenza November 12 2009, 04:19:43 UTC

Thanks so much! <3 And, yeah, I fell in love with this pairing after only a few episodes of Psych, too. Their BFFness just slaaaays me.

lozenger8 November 12 2009, 14:30:01 UTC

We both ended a Shawn/Gus story with the exact same line. OMG.

eta: hi, hi, hi, I totally accidentally pressed 'enter' before I entered the rest of my comment. The comment which was going to go thusly:

I LOVE THIS. Shawn is so crazy Shawn and I like how little convincing it takes to get Gus to realise he's bisexual, and the dialogue, and the tone of it all, and the He-Man reference. It was awesome. ♥

trascendenza November 13 2009, 00:11:55 UTC

HIVE MIND FTW. \o/

Ha, yeah, in like two weeks Shawn's going to be talking about how Gus was and Gus will roll his eyes and not mention the fact that his big moment of revelation came *after* he went home and stared at the Lost Boys poster for five hours straight (enough, really, to make anyone get in touch with their bisexuality).

And thank you! <3 I'm so glad to hear those parts worked, yaay.

arallara November 13 2009, 05:28:31 UTC

Oh, I looooooved that! You have a really nice sense for their interplay, especially their humor and their moments of awkward vulnerability. Really funny and sweet, and it made me totally happy! :)

trascendenza November 13 2009, 06:49:19 UTC

Oh, I'm so glad to hear those things worked. Their interplay is basically my favorite thing about the show. Glad I could share some of the happy :) Thank you! <3