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Oct 25, 2008 13:38

the engagements are booked through the end of the world
lost || desmond/penny
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spoilers through "there's no place like home, part three"
for oxoniensis' Porn Battle VI ( original comment)

They go below-deck after Jack gives his speech, and Penny asks him what he wants to do now.
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genre:het, character:penelope widmore, project:porn battle, character:desmond hume, fandom:lost, pairing:desmond/penny, rating:r

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coffeebits October 25 2008, 18:11:56 UTC
That was just lovely, enjoyed every minute of it, especially the descriptions and their reactions.
Well done. :)

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transposition73 October 25 2008, 18:13:12 UTC
Thanks so much, love :)

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coffeebits October 25 2008, 18:17:50 UTC
You're welcome :)
just appreciating good porn and good writing. Obviously. :P

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redfairie19 October 25 2008, 19:26:31 UTC
OMG P0RN! WELL-WRITTEN PORN!

Seriously, I loves it. All that need and waiting and love all tangled up? *sigh* Beautiful, Kelly. Really.

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transposition73 October 25 2008, 20:06:28 UTC
Eek, thank you! ♥

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hendercats October 25 2008, 22:46:41 UTC
as her hips buck in rhythm with his, he decides God will just have to bloody wait
Marvelous line! Very nice post-reunion vignette.

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transposition73 October 26 2008, 00:07:28 UTC
Thanks very much!

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bachlava October 26 2008, 00:29:29 UTC
Oh, wow. I really loved this. It's so true to character, to Desmond's way of approaching things and to the... rather passionate person, shall we say, who seems to be lurking under that ultra-reserved exterior of his. With Des and Penny in particular there's that particularly difficult balancing act of all the emotions and complications and history tangled up with their relationship, and then just what happens when... okay, I'm going to stop myself here out of propriety. Suffice to say that this is hot, sweet, and wonderful, and I adore it.

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transposition73 October 26 2008, 00:54:53 UTC
Eep, thank you so much! :>

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evilmissbecky October 26 2008, 13:39:00 UTC
Oh I love this, but that last line just broke me. I'm so grateful to the Lost PTB for giving us this happy reunion. I just pray that they don't screw it all up somehow.

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transposition73 October 26 2008, 16:35:13 UTC
Yeah, I really hope they get a happy ending, sigh.

Thanks so much!

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