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Jun 14, 2007 16:15

the rain like silver in my ears, fat nothing on my plate
supernatural || dean&sam; omc
pg

Dad's not back yet. He said he'd be back by Sunday at seven, and it's past nine, and Sammy is screaming and crying, and Dean doesn't know what to do.
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fandom:supernatural, rating:pg, character:dean winchester, genre:gen, character:[omc], character:sam winchester

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nereem June 14 2007, 22:47:06 UTC
ARGH THE PAIN IN MY CHEST..... you're killing me... i swear.... *g*

God, how incredibly sad. I mean, i am quite sure there were times like this- though i do think that John did love his boys and tried to be there when he could- there were certainly times when he wasn't- meaning to or not- its very sad and its no wonder that Sam became everything to Dean. And vice versa. He had to do his duty as the big brother.

Very lovvvveeer-ly flow, good use of dialogue and the details above with the cleaning i really liked- :)

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transposition73 June 14 2007, 23:17:48 UTC
Yeah, I don't think John was *that* bad of a father *all* the time, but, you know. :(

Thank you so so much!

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indusnm June 14 2007, 23:08:52 UTC
I both love and get depressed by fics that deal with them as kids. It's sad because it's no way to raise a kid, but let's face it- kids all over this world are going through it every day.
It seems that there are such few people like that shopkeeper left.
Loved it- wee!chesters rule!

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transposition73 June 14 2007, 23:18:29 UTC
I both love and get depressed by fics that deal with them as kids.
Gah, me too. *holds them close*

Thanks so much :)

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tiferet June 14 2007, 23:45:00 UTC
So sad and sweet. aw, babies.

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transposition73 June 15 2007, 00:15:51 UTC
*holds them*

Thank you!

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albeitslowly June 15 2007, 00:03:41 UTC

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transposition73 June 15 2007, 00:15:58 UTC
<3 :)

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forgotten_pixie June 15 2007, 00:27:23 UTC
Oh, this is just so so lovely. Fanastic, and heart-aching.

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transposition73 June 15 2007, 01:03:34 UTC
Thank you very much :)

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