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Apr 17, 2007 03:08

taught me to weep and moan
supernatural || dean/ofc
nc17 [pwp, prostitution]
for quidditchkiss

You don't know how you ended up in his car (it may or may not have involved a MaiTai and a prize-winning smile, but it doesn't matter now).
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fandom:supernatural, genre:het, character:[ofc], character:dean winchester, rating:nc-17, pairing:dean/oc

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22by7 April 17 2007, 17:11:20 UTC
I WAS JUST LISTENING TO 'YOU SHOOK ME'.

jesus. this was a tiny, perfect bomb. in the good way. for some reason, this felt more like outsider!pov than marysue het, because of the hooker!Dean factor. i mean, hooker!Dean is common enough (pretend that's not a horrible pun), but in this case, it feels like a twist. which is great.

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transposition73 April 18 2007, 04:39:57 UTC
:O PSYCHIC!

The only instances of hooker!Dean I've seen are where he services men, and, I dunno, I wanted to break out of that. Call me an optimist. :]

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ultraviolet9a April 17 2007, 18:14:36 UTC
I think I concur to what 22by7 said. This is not mary sue. If it were mary sue it'd probably be badly written and I'd have a headache at the first four lines of reading. I'm headache free and this is really good writing.

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transposition73 April 18 2007, 04:47:37 UTC
I guess I was thinking more "self-insertion" than Mary Sue. Oh well, in conclusion: Eee, thank you :>

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zelost_mind April 17 2007, 18:44:45 UTC
Oh, a little burst of pleasure there, excellent.

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transposition73 April 18 2007, 05:00:27 UTC
Thanks very much :]

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ltlredhairdgirl April 17 2007, 20:20:21 UTC
I am generally not fond of prostitution, but DAMN.

Damn damn damn damn damn!

Going back to coherency, this totally did not come off as Mary Sue-ish to me either. This was great, love!

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transposition73 April 18 2007, 05:02:14 UTC
Heeeee, I'm glad you enjoyed it, baby ;D

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quidditchkiss April 18 2007, 02:33:24 UTC
Every time I read this I feel like I am getting owned by Dean AND Robert Plant. And that is a serious and dangerous combination. This is so perfect and NOT Mary Sue and it just... I love thinking that I just whored myself to Dean. LMFAO

Thank you for this. YOU ARE BRILLIANT.

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transposition73 April 18 2007, 05:04:36 UTC
No problem, baby. Any time. ;D

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