and the dead one is --

Mar 24, 2012 23:17

(like a record, baby)

Warning(s): Some of the things in the comments might be creepy, upsetting, triggery. 

warning/trigger: non-con, truth or dare

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orange_kitty521 March 25 2012, 03:01:18 UTC
Luciano Bradley considered himself a very patient man, and as every patient man will tell you, the things you want are worth waiting for. So he waited. He waited, and he watched as that flippant blond paraded his relationship with the dirty eleven around, (stealing soft kisses in dark corridors when they thought no one was looking or letting a friendly hug linger a bit too long), and he very discreetly watched as the Knight of Three pressed his lips to the furrowed brow of the smaller boy with a soft touch on the brunette’s chin and an even softer promise (‘I’ll be back before you know it, now don’t get too lonely without me’). It was such a touching moment, almost heart breaking and Bradley felt like Lord Weinberg deserved a present when he returned ( ... )

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:D scribblestorm March 25 2012, 03:06:46 UTC
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D !!!

Now that we have that out of the way *cough*....

Your Bradley is always a treat ^__^. (“Do you always act like a little whore with him, or do I just do it better?” -- fffff love ♥) In any case, I think it was clever to cut right before the action and skip right to the results, leaving us to fill in all the delicious painful details. Poor Gino though! That can't be a good sight to come home to.

Lovely touch with the branding though, yummmm

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Re: <3 orange_kitty521 March 25 2012, 03:25:45 UTC
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3!!!!

awww my Bradley is always willing to please fufufufu. and yes,I had faith that your mind could fill in allll the lovely little details :D. I do feel bad for Gino, it seemed like he was just starting to get Suzaku to open up and then this happens, which will most likely make him shut himself in again.

I do love the branding, too much.

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transient_words March 25 2012, 03:10:10 UTC
HOLY O_O

This-this is scary. I mean you didn't write it out but fkfjkfjfkjfkfjf

fkjfkjfkfjfk

(The imagery at the end -- very vivid, and scary.)

(You have very vivid prose <3)

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orange_kitty521 March 25 2012, 03:34:41 UTC
:D

Luciano is terrifying but so intriguing

(I'm so glad you like it, Suzaku is too pretty when he's hurt.)

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