Comments | trancer21: FIC: "But A Whimper" [TSCC; Sarah/Cameron]

trancer21

FIC: "But A Whimper" [TSCC; Sarah/Cameron]

Jun 02, 2009 12:30

Title: A Whimper
Fandom: The Sarah Connor Chronicles
Pairing: Sarah/Cameron
Genre: AU
Rating: PG
Word Count: 436
Summary: Judgment Day came not with a bang but a whimper.

( Judgment Day came not with a bang but a whimper. )

femslash, fandom: sarah connor, fan fic

Comments 31

soporificeffect June 2 2009, 19:41:31 UTC

beautiful.
loved this line: "The kiss lasts forever, ends too quickly"

foreverxkisses June 3 2009, 04:52:50 UTC

I second this. :)

trancer21 June 3 2009, 06:30:44 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

but a whimper jzia June 2 2009, 19:57:03 UTC

I really liked this I liked how the sense of hopelessness pervades the sentiments but at the same time this sense of maybe hope? I don't know I'm not sure how to verbalise it. But getting to the point I really liked this it moved me

Re: but a whimper trancer21 June 3 2009, 06:33:11 UTC

Thank you. I wanted to place Sarah and Cameron at a point where they were both 'lost' because it's not a different world than the one they were expecting but, in the end, still find each other.

4kennedy June 2 2009, 21:53:17 UTC

that was great! I like how you changed the future we all assume will happen, it's interesting to find out what would happen when it changed. thanks for sharing. yay for Camerah =)

trancer21 June 3 2009, 06:34:39 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I just figured, if Cam taking Sarah and John into the future changed the future, what if something else changed? Sort of like the proverbial butterflies wings.

4kennedy June 3 2009, 18:18:46 UTC

you're so right with that theory. the butterfly effect, I liked the movies. hope to read more Camerah from you soon!

hito_rasu June 2 2009, 22:44:12 UTC

Interesting concept. What do you do in a future where John Connor is (potentially) obsolete? Hope you expand on this universe further. This would make a great prologue (hint hint;-)

trancer21 June 3 2009, 06:43:34 UTC

Lol, I do not understand this 'hint' you are talking about!

It's an idea that definitely could go in a hundred different directions. Like, I don't necessarily think John would be obsolete. Plus, there'd still be Terminator's running around with the parameters to kill John and then there's Sarah's cancer risk.. um, yeah, this would *totally* make a good prologue! Now, I just have to find time to write it!

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trancer21 June 3 2009, 06:30:22 UTC

Thank you. Lol, yeah, Sarah actually survives the end of the world but it's not the apocalypse she'd planned for so.. might as well make out with the hot robot!