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Left Behind (Doctor, Jack)

Dec 10, 2007 09:08

Title: Left Behind
Author: szm
Rating: G
Characters: Doctor, Jack

A/N This is apparently what I do instead of sleep! This isn't betaed, if someone would like to offer to beta things from this universe that would be very useful, and I would be very grateful. I don't want to ask someone who isn't reading this universe, that doesn't seem fair.

( Left Behind )

series: learner drivers, jack, 10doctor

Comments 12

calavarna December 10 2007, 10:47:29 UTC

Wow! What a fantastic Jack/Doctor dynamic. And Ianto's presence can still be felt strongly even if he has pinched the TARDIS and is off swanning around the universe. :) Is it wrong that I'd like to slap some sense into the Doctor? And Jack, for that matter.

I can beta any time, although the differences in time zones might not work out very well...

szm December 10 2007, 15:31:24 UTC

Thank you very much! Yes both of them need a good slap at the very least. But I do feel for both of them in this *pets the broken ones*

Ooo thanks I shall add you to my torture beta list.

crowson75 December 10 2007, 12:35:40 UTC

*Whimpers* So sad! Brilliant but awwwwwwww!

szm December 10 2007, 15:33:00 UTC

Thank you, bless them they're both so useless at the talking about feelings and stuff.

love_jackianto December 10 2007, 15:23:57 UTC

Oh that was wonderful :D You really captured the characters voices.

szm December 10 2007, 15:33:34 UTC

Thank you!

tanarian December 10 2007, 18:33:19 UTC

Oh, this is brilliant! *does happy dance again* So powerful and angsty. They have so much in common and all the Doctor can see are the differences. And Jack wanting so hard to be right but never able to forget that he's wrong. *pets the two of them and then belts them around the head*

Hmmm, Ianto might want to materialise in London first and send a text message ahead of him!

szm December 10 2007, 20:27:57 UTC

I don't think that Jack can shake the fact that the Doctor called him wrong, because I think what Jack wants most of all is for the Doctor to tell him he's good.

And no the Doctor can't see the similarites in their postions at all. Because he is a stupidhead *nods*.

Hmm yes... that might be a good idea, either that or hiding behind Tosh.

Thank you very much. Glad your enjoying these so far.

jadesfire December 21 2007, 11:36:52 UTC

Ouchouchouch. The argument between Jack and the Doctor here feels so raw and real. I love the comment about linear time, and the sense of the seconds ticking past for the Doctor now. Really nicely done.