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fic: The Non-Date

Jan 19, 2010 15:06

Fic: The Non-Date
Author/Beta: tracker_lucifer & eonism
Rating: PG 13
Author's note: This is written for the ST_ Respect competition as a "first date" piece. I hope you guys enjoy.

( The Non-Date )

Comments 11

secretsolitaire January 19 2010, 23:28:33 UTC

Oh, dear! This was hilarious.

phantomminuet January 19 2010, 23:31:04 UTC

Adorable! Although the cave ceiling with eyes was kinda creepy.

missmarie9 January 20 2010, 00:45:30 UTC

Leave it to Jim to somehow make solid plans go awry.

Good story. Thanks for writing this.

lulabel January 20 2010, 01:57:00 UTC

Oh, I like this. It's funny with a real edge to it and somehow it managed to end up on a very sweet note. I appreciate how you've depicted them both as such GUYS - not particularly romantic and very succinct communicators.

therumjournals January 20 2010, 03:09:20 UTC

awww...the best date is an away-mission-gone wrong, i always say...