Will you anonymously post something you have created (essay excerpt, drawing, video, sweater, etc) so that anon can critique you? Anon may also try to guess whose creation it is.
Awww. Poor polar bear. I am impressed that you crocheted something that requires sticking feet on, though. The only amigumuri or whatever thing that I ever made was an owl, and I was going to tear my hair out trying to attach the feet and eyes and wings and ugh.
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I am impressed that you crocheted something that requires sticking feet on, though. The only amigumuri or whatever thing that I ever made was an owl, and I was going to tear my hair out trying to attach the feet and eyes and wings and ugh.
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as she runs her nails along your back
in marring trails of graceless pain,
her lips on flesh to capture stain.
& curse the night that brought you here
in tangled limbs of desperate fear;
dropped to the floor in shameless need,
your dignity lost in tepid greed.
self-woven web of stainless steel
to shelter wounds that would not heal,
the threads now ground to silver dust -
she hollowed you with tainted lust.
so there you lie with stolen skin;
her teeth then finely digging in,
an engraved map of furied theft -
your ribcage cracked & left bereft.
& now this bitter ending, cold & true -
she took all that was left of you,
as you dig your grave & eat the dirt
to consecrate your hardened hurt.
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