All Stars Week One: Erudition

[toxic_apiaceae]

WARNING: rape, drug use, adultness, very not safe for work!

Comments

[keppiehed]

Wow, this was ... *whew* This was just breathtaking! What a way to come roaring back to the writing scene! I thought I liked the first part better, but you ended up hooking me in the second half with the vividness. It was just fantastic throughout. I don't have praise high enough. I hope you write more about the whole escapade. What a tangled web you wove here. I just want to know MORE!

[toxic_apiaceae]

Aww, thanks, keppie! I've been having a right lousy time writing wise, so it really means a lot to hear you say it turned out well. I agree completely that the first half was MUCH stronger. Reading back through it, you can totally tell that second part was written very last minute. All those tensing changes during the rape scene... *twitches*

Fortunately, the week two prompt works perfectly for the second half of this story. So, yes. You will see more.

[keppiehed]

If this is you having trouble, I am just going to lie down and cry uncle right now. Holy mackerel. What are you talking about?! *mumbles old chestnut people being their about own worst critics and seriously considers rewriting week 2 to brace myself for what is sure to be a most terrific onslaught of writerly competition!*

[toxic_apiaceae]

HAHA!!! No, seriously. This is me cramming stuff out last minute and being very rusty. Hence the reason I'm now in the run off poll and will probably be eliminated. But it's been fun and I need to finish that week two piece.

[keppiehed]

I don't know why you were in the runoff in the first place. Can people not read or something? Seriously, wtf, people of the Flame. Normally I write all sorts of odes to them all in their amazingness, but I think they dropped the ball on this one.

[toxic_apiaceae]

Eh, it's okay, keppie. I haven't been much of a presence around the Flame, so it doesn't surprise me my name's off the map right now. Also, I wrote a super gritty, NSFW piece. There are a LOT of people who don't want to read that. Then there's the fact that, at least I feel, my take on the prompt was a bit liberal and, well... Honestly, I'm not surprised to be in the runoff. ***HUGS*** But thanks for the vote of confidence! I appreciate it greatly, especially coming from you!