my feedback never does you justice, it's not fair ):quinolineSeptember 28 2007, 07:15:20 UTC
oh my god let me recompose myself just for a sec.
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OKAY I LOVE THIS. BUT YOU KNOW WHAT?? I LOVE YOU EVEN MORE. i have no idea where to start-- this whole thing is perfection, 100% fucking perfection.
1) i love dinara and i can't profess to knowing her much, but i think you wrote her amazingly. she may act more mature and sensible than marat, but deep down you know she's just like him :'D AND SHE CALLED TOMAS A PONY.
2) and okay so marat calling tomas "paris" may just be the cutest thing ever.
3) “Blind?” he asks.
“No, I see,” Tomas says
WHAT THE FUCK BEST DIALOGUE IN THE WHOLE WORLD I SWEAR ;3; HAHAHHAHA ohmygod ohmygod you = genius kthxbai.
4) i love that this is intertwined with so many true events (watching marat and cincinnati, fetching his water bottles, the practice in new york, paris-- the stuff that noone would realise unless they were obsessed like us ;D it's amazing because it's all so true, you know?!) and tomas is so fucking cute with the water bottle and the towel and all his "i like you"s. my god he is precious. HE WANTS TO OWN A PARAKEET OKAY THAT MADE ME CRY SO BAD HAHAHAHA. you write him so perfectly and it's no wonder marat's falling for him so hard and fast~
5) “I fall getting out of bath. My finger it was hit on side of the sink. Hurt.” T________________T .......TOMAS. OH MY GOD. HAHAHAH. THIS WAS SO ADORABLE. AND THEN HIM KISSING MARAT'S CHEEK OH SHIT HAHAHA. SO CUTE. HOW DO YOU DO IT. AH!
6) Marat doesn’t do awkward anymore but Tomas personifies it. = MARAT AND TOMAS IN A NUTSHELL.
7) it's amazing. tomas is even awkward during sex. wait, i suppose he should be even more awkward :P
8) do i even need to tell you how pretty your writing is. ;3; everything else just becomes bland in comparison. and i was just thinking, your writing is the sort you'd see in novels and classy high-end magazines. I WISH I COULD WRITE LIKE YOU.
i am so happy you liked the mix!!!
ps: you can bet i'm going to read this no less than five times this week. THANK YOU FOR MAKING MY DAY, BB~ ♥
Re: my feedback never does you justice, it's not fair ):tourofdutySeptember 28 2007, 14:55:06 UTC
UM DO NOT EVER HATE ON YOUR FEEDBACK BECAUSE THIS IS AMAZING. I AM BLUSHING AND ASLDFJADSLKFJ I HAD THE BIGGEST GRIN ON MY FACE THE WHOLE TIME I WAS READING THIS BECAUSE IT WAS JUST SO FUCKING SWEET ANDF ADLFKJ I'M JUST SO GLAD YOU LIKED THIS FIC AND OMG I JUST RE-READ THIS AND I'M STILL BLUSHING D: I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU
i totally threw the pony thing in there for you! i tried to make this littered with all of our little marat/tomas things so i had to have pony in there somewhere! but i agree, about dinara. i mean she's more mature than marat but in the end she's showing that she's just like marat
HAHAHSDLFKJ I WAS HOPING YOU WOULD LOVE THE "BLIND" PART AND I'M GLAD I WASN'T WRONG!
ahh i'm so glad you're picking up on all of that! the whole time i was writing this (while listening to your awesome mix) i had in mind all the conversations that we had had about them and all the things we had dug up about them and i'm just so glad that you liked the characterization because i LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE your tomas dlsfjadslkfj they are just perfect together omg D:
but asdlkfj this is the sweetest feedback ever and omg i loved it so much and it was just dlkfkj i'm so glad you liked the fic and oh my god faldskfj i love your writing so sdlkfj YOU NEED TO WRITE BECAUSE I MISS READING YOUR FIC!
i *loved* the mix and i'm so glad i made your day brighter ♥
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OKAY I LOVE THIS. BUT YOU KNOW WHAT?? I LOVE YOU EVEN MORE. i have no idea where to start-- this whole thing is perfection, 100% fucking perfection.
1) i love dinara and i can't profess to knowing her much, but i think you wrote her amazingly. she may act more mature and sensible than marat, but deep down you know she's just like him :'D AND SHE CALLED TOMAS A PONY.
2) and okay so marat calling tomas "paris" may just be the cutest thing ever.
3) “Blind?” he asks.
“No, I see,” Tomas says
WHAT THE FUCK BEST DIALOGUE IN THE WHOLE WORLD I SWEAR ;3; HAHAHHAHA ohmygod ohmygod you = genius kthxbai.
4) i love that this is intertwined with so many true events (watching marat and cincinnati, fetching his water bottles, the practice in new york, paris-- the stuff that noone would realise unless they were obsessed like us ;D it's amazing because it's all so true, you know?!) and tomas is so fucking cute with the water bottle and the towel and all his "i like you"s. my god he is precious. HE WANTS TO OWN A PARAKEET OKAY THAT MADE ME CRY SO BAD HAHAHAHA. you write him so perfectly and it's no wonder marat's falling for him so hard and fast~
5) “I fall getting out of bath. My finger it was hit on side of the sink. Hurt.”
T________________T .......TOMAS. OH MY GOD. HAHAHAH. THIS WAS SO ADORABLE. AND THEN HIM KISSING MARAT'S CHEEK OH SHIT HAHAHA. SO CUTE. HOW DO YOU DO IT. AH!
6) Marat doesn’t do awkward anymore but Tomas personifies it. = MARAT AND TOMAS IN A NUTSHELL.
7) it's amazing. tomas is even awkward during sex. wait, i suppose he should be even more awkward :P
8) do i even need to tell you how pretty your writing is. ;3; everything else just becomes bland in comparison. and i was just thinking, your writing is the sort you'd see in novels and classy high-end magazines. I WISH I COULD WRITE LIKE YOU.
i am so happy you liked the mix!!!
ps: you can bet i'm going to read this no less than five times this week. THANK YOU FOR MAKING MY DAY, BB~ ♥
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i totally threw the pony thing in there for you! i tried to make this littered with all of our little marat/tomas things so i had to have pony in there somewhere! but i agree, about dinara. i mean she's more mature than marat but in the end she's showing that she's just like marat
HAHAHSDLFKJ I WAS HOPING YOU WOULD LOVE THE "BLIND" PART AND I'M GLAD I WASN'T WRONG!
ahh i'm so glad you're picking up on all of that! the whole time i was writing this (while listening to your awesome mix) i had in mind all the conversations that we had had about them and all the things we had dug up about them and i'm just so glad that you liked the characterization because i LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE your tomas dlsfjadslkfj they are just perfect together omg D:
but asdlkfj this is the sweetest feedback ever and omg i loved it so much and it was just dlkfkj i'm so glad you liked the fic and oh my god faldskfj i love your writing so sdlkfj YOU NEED TO WRITE BECAUSE I MISS READING YOUR FIC!
i *loved* the mix and i'm so glad i made your day brighter ♥
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LOL YOU SOUND LIKE NOVAK
tomas is such a little pony, you know it!! HIS HAPPY HEAD TOSS. HOW DOES ANYONE COMPETE WITH THAT. NEIGH.
THAT CONVERSATION WAS THE BEST I HAVE EVER READ. AMAZING AMAZING. IT MAKES ME LOVE THEM EVEN MORE, IF THAT IS EVEN POSSIBLE.
courtni. we are psychicly connected. you know it. you incorporated everything in here and it is so fucking awesome~!!!!! PS: TOMAS IS YOURS TOO!!
i'm so happy you don't think my feedback isn't massive amounts of lame because everytime i read my feedback its like OMG. DO NOT WANT.
I MISS WRITING BUT I JUST CAN'T SOBBBBBB YOU KNOW I ONLY WRITE FOR YOU!! IF I DIDN'T HAVE YOU TO WRITE FOR, I'D BE LIKE BZZZZZ WRITING WHO CARES.
yay~! ♥!
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