Only One [TakuHachi!gen; G]

[tothe_slaughter]

Title: Only One
Author: the_lady_lamb
Genre: NANA
Sub-genre: Angst/Romance, I think, maybe?/Gen
Summary: Hachi makes dinner for her complaining daughter and thinks about the fact that her life sucks. On ice. Only not. This story sucks just as much as the summary.
Rated: G for lameness.
Author's Notes: yukari_rin gave me a NANA prompt for my first fan fiction. I

Comments

[aradiantsun]

"I have never written anything shittier." you said? BULL. And this fits the prompt so hush up.

This was a lovely little peek into suppertime for the Ichinose women. Satsuki is so precious! Satsuki makes a face, her dark eyebrows turned down. It’s the kind of face that makes her look an awful lot like Nana, actually. But Hachi wonders if that’s just her wanting her friend back somehow. If that’s just her trying to put furniture in front of the fact that Satsuki looks like Nana because Satsuki looks like her father. (Like she’s painting over that poster stain on her wall again.) That killed me. All of it, but especially the "painting over the poster stain" part. Guh. (And Hachi knows full well that she has never been Takumi’s only one.) DDD: Excellent little sentence that says soooo much.

Thank you for writing this for me, love, and thnk you for letting me pop your NANA cherry. The only thing I wish you had included was some mention of little!Ren, but his not being included didn't take away from my enjoyment of this dear little piece.

[tothe_slaughter]

Like all virgins, I don't think I did too great my first time around. I guess it's not the shitiest thing I've ever written but you gave me a great prompt and I gave you...this. I'm disappointed in myself and can only hope that my next try is a hell of a lot better, for your sake as well as mine.

But thank you for reading - I'm glad that (as always) the sentences I liked best were the ones that hit home for you.

[aradiantsun]

Well, then keep the prompt simmering on one of the back burners of your brain and tackle it again when you want to. Lord knows that it can be used in so many different ways for the pairing I requested. I'm sorry you're disappointed in yourself and this, but I don't think you have any reason to be. So chin up, lovey!

♥ You never disappoint me love, and I'm so glad you let me pester you the way I do.