Ohhhh, these are gorgeous. I love the last line of the last one, about "she is only so much velvet". May I use it in an icon? I'll credit you, of course. You rock :D
Welcome to the community! I hope you'll be posting more here. A lot more. :)
These are both so gorgeous. I especially loved the ending of the second--it was amazing how you crammed so much delicate, intricate imagery into so few lines.
Wow. The imagery is so intricate and visual and real. I can really feel it, and the way the words sound when you read them aloud flows like music. Beautiful, and very compelling.
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You rock :D
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*runs away to feel special*
*peeks back in* Yes'm. :D
Thank you!
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These are both so gorgeous. I especially loved the ending of the second--it was amazing how you crammed so much delicate, intricate imagery into so few lines.
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And . . . thank you! :D
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