Doctor Who fic: Second generation (2/?)

[torn_eledhwen]

Chapter 2 of this fic, however long it will be ... In which Maxie gets the Doctor home, and there is a joyful reunion.

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Chapter 1

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[ladysarahii]

I was definitely interested by this story-- usually I'm not into 'children of' fics, but I like this one a lot. Maxie certainly isn't a Mary Sue and I hope she gets to take a trip on the TARDIS for being awesome and not a Mary Sue!

[torn_eledhwen]

I'm not usually into "children of" fics either, ironically enough. If she turns into anything resembling a Mary-Sue, feel free to shoot me (metaphorically). :)

[beatle_maniac]

Yay, another chapter!

"...the Doctor seized a hammer and began hitting the console with enthusiasm." --that is a perfect description of that. I love it.

[torn_eledhwen]

I love it when he does that; it had to go in! Thanks for commenting again.

[persiflage_1]

Yay for another chapter !!

Fun !

[torn_eledhwen]

There are more coming! Thanks. :)

[persiflage_1]

Excellent !

[domsbabygrl]

AHHH!

“Hello, Martha Jones,” he said, leaning against the doorframe.

Martha gave a gasp, dropped her handbag and in two steps was across the room and hugging the Doctor, who picked her up and swung her round, laughing.

I can definitely see Ten doing this. And he would look just like he did when he was leaning against the side of the building in S&J with that smug look on his face. And they did a spinny hug! ♥

“You have two hearts.”

HAHA! So frank. Love it.

“He never could drive this thing,” Martha said to Maxie.

TEEHEE!

On to part three!

[in_the_end]

Ooh, I'm enjoying this.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

[kynaii]

Heh.
Loved this line.
I’ve had enough!” she informed them. “A man in a blue box tells me he’s fought off library books …”