[FIC] Of Strawberries and Cream

[torakiss]

∞ Of Strawberries and Cream
→ EXO: Kris/Suho; Smut, Fluff, NC-17; 3650 words
! beta: blake_maclaren
!! unnecessary sequel to Escalator
!!! for Ayesha ♥

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[kira_min18]

HOW-DARE-YOU-UPDATE-WHILE-I-WAS-ASLEEP!!!!!1!1!!!1!1!!!!1!!!!1!!! (TAHT SOULFIGHTER GIF IS NOT NECESSARYYYY ;;;A;;;)



(warning: the following comments may contain excessive keyboardsmash, capslock and non-coherent spazzing. please read them in an isolated room if you wish to maintain your (already ruined) public image. thank you.)

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the other was holding Junmyeon’s tiny gloved hand because he is quite afraid of losing his lover amongst the crowd of shoppers in the mall.
IKR THAT'S A WISE THING TO DO /NODS/ BC JOONIE IS SMALL AND HE MIGHT GET SQUISHED IN THE CROWD ((ONLY YIFAN HAS THE PRIVILEGE TO SQUISH HIMMMMM))

“What’s taking you so long?” Yifan pouts as he casually walks in
NO MISTER WU YOU DON'T POUT OKAY BUT IT'S ALRIGHT TO POUT IN FRONT OF JOONIE (AND KISS HIS HAND IN PUBLIC) YES I TOTALLY APPROVE OF THAT AKAKLNDLKNADKS

“Oh, hyung, I’m almost done,” Junmyeon stops humming
HE'S CALLING HIM HYUUUUUNGNGNGNGNGNGNGNGNGNGNGNGNGNG I GIVE UP (BUT I STILL NEED TO FINISH READING THIS HNNNGGGG)

Yifan observes that a bit of the cream got smudged on the younger’s lips
OH. (¬◇¬)

"You've got cream on your lips," Yifan answers his question in a whisper, using a husky voice that Junmyeon deems unnecessary.
HUSKY VOICEUUUUU SOBBINGINGING

and the younger male shudders as Yifan’s cream-coated fingers touch his cheeks.
Yifan's breath hitches into their kiss as the cream on the younger male's fingers touches the sensitive skin on his neck.
CREAM. CREAM EVERYWHERE. //SPRAYS WHIPPED CREAM ON YOUR HEAD//

"Hyung, the kitchen counter is cold,"
"Let's warm it up, shall we?"
oh let's see HOW YOU GUYS WARM IT UP

Sweeter than the cream, tastier than the strawberries.
THIS LINE!!1!1!!!1!!1 OFC

Junmyeon puts the strawberry in his mouth, dangling it in between his lips.
;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;AAAAA;;;;;;;;;;;;; THIS IMAGE NO NONONONONONONO MY HEART CAN'T ENDURE THIS

He plunges his teeth unto the younger's collarbones, sucking on that tiny mole
HOW-DARE-YOUOUOUOUOU PLEASE (don't) STAHP MEDDLING WITH MY HART

He bites too harshly on the mole on one of the younger's defined abdominal muscles
HHHNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG MY HEART CHAMBER IS BURSTING ONE BY ONE IDEK IF I'D BE ABLE TO FINISH READING THIS I'M TRYING HARD TO STAY ALIVE U-KNOW

Junmyeon opens his eyes, tilting his head to the side and then he sees his naked form in the dark-tinted window in front of him.
THIS IS THE HOTTEST THING EVAAAR I CAN'T I'M BURNING UP

They see both of their reflections on the glass window, and they remain that way for a few minutes.
LITERALLY HOWLING AND CALLING FOR MERCY

“See? The kitchen counter is not that cold anymore.”
but it's gonna get cold soon so are they gonna use the same method again to warm it up OuO

“Hmmm. Delicious. Or rather, it was perfect. Just as you are perfect,” Yifan answers.
CHHEEEZEH I CAN TOTALLY DROWN IN THIS CHEESE AND DIE INSIDE



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LEMME LOVE YOUUUUUU


OHKAY KICHIE I TOTALLY REALLY ABSOLUTELY LOVE THISS!!1!!! IT'S A BIT DIFFERENT THAN YOUR USUAL STYLE BUT IT'S A PLEASANT CHANGE! DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I WAS (YI)FANNING MYSELF AS I READ THIS??? EVERYTHING IS SO FLUFFY AND PERFECT AND OFC HIGHLIGHTS ON THAT SMUT SCENE KJJDASKLDNLSNDKSNDKASNSKLSANDBSKKS UGLY SOBBING FOR THIS WONDERFUL FIC I HAZ NO REGRET DESU. FRIGGING STANDING OVATION FOR YOU. ಥ⌣ಥ

and thank y♥u s♥ much f♥r the sp♥t. U_______U

I AM LOVE YOUUU SOULMATEFIGHTER!

[torakiss]

DEAR LAWRD HOW DO I REPLY TO THIS COMMENT!!!!1!1!!11!!ONE!!


lol to be very, very honest, this took me days to think of a very good reply because this comment is just so epic and not to mention i've got a lot on my hands on schoolwork for this week.

ONLY YIFAN HAS THE PRIVILEGE TO SQUISH HIMMMMM
NO MISTER WU YOU DON'T POUT OKAY BUT IT'S ALRIGHT TO POUT IN FRONT OF JOONIE (AND KISS HIS HAND IN PUBLIC)


HE'S CALLING HIM HYUUUUUNGNGNGNGNGNGNGNGNGNGNGNGNGNG
.........how do you even pronounce that it sounds like an ambulance's siren

SOBBINGINGING
I AM LAUGHING SO HARD

CREAM. CREAM EVERYWHERE. //SPRAYS WHIPPED CREAM ON YOUR HEAD//
okay kirah


.........okay.


but it's gonna get cold soon so are they gonna use the same method again to warm it up OuO
SRSLY WHAT ARE YOU

this comment is just so epic :)) i never fail to laugh so hard no matter how many times i get back to this :))
i'm glad (and relieved) to know that you like it! ;;u;; this means a lot since this is my very first smut fic and i was so, so, so anxious. i guess next challenge would be how to incorporate smut in my writing style? ;u; but no i shan't even think of writing another smut fic yet no please i shan't

and yeah, yeah, i adore you (i love you, really! ♥)