un : : 내 사랑은 항상 네 곁에 있을게

[torakiss]

∞ 十二月の手紙。 December Letters
→ TVXQ/(JYJ): Yunho/Jaejoong; Angst, Drama, Romance, PG-13, 3341 words
! beta: anyajulia
★ a birthday present for byuldeureul
♪ inspired by 安室奈美恵’s 「Love Story」

Comments

There's always something soft and delicate and beautiful--

[byuldeureul]

--about the way you write and the way you word things, dearest キチ妹ちゃん ♥

And your YunJae. Gosh, even though-- I wasn't sure if this was an AU story at first, to be honest. But I realized by the end it didn't matter. No matter whether you're looking at this as a story about YunJae in the future, about YunJae in another lifetime, or just two people in love, longing, and waiting for one another, this is a beautiful take on a theme that could have been cliché but, instead, came out so so RIGHT. So perfectly right.

I love that Jaejoong ran, strange as it is to say (it's so him to not want to burden others, to keep his feelings tightly under lock and key, not wanting to come back until he was damn well ready to move on...or so he thought).

I love that Yunho not only waited but, all this time, couldn't say the words he conveyed in all those letters to Jaejoong directly but the sentiment, the raw /honesty/ of what that says about him shines through (yet another thing that's very true to how I see Yunho IRL - controlled, measured, careful actions that always mean what they are except when they don't. but not with Jaejoong, never with Jaejoong, because not only is he too honest with Jaejoong but only reacts that way because it's Jaejoong, yet another thing that shines through so easily even to the untrained eye).

And I love, love, LOVE what you did with the "letters" concept (everything felt so perfectly arranged, like piling up snow on one's doorstep on a mid-December morning-- and not to mention all the snow imagery and descriptions!!!! You really know how to make your お姉ちゃん wistful bby huhuhuhuhuuuu I wanted to see snow that very MOMENT when I read those descriptions, honestly ; ; for a girl who's never seen snow in person, you captured the beauty of winter so well!!) and all that this fic represents!! Gosh, I'm just-- so so happy with this fic and everything you wrote, honestly.

To close up here, though, I want to say one last time a big, biiiiiiiiiig thank you to you for all the warm wishes for my birthday and for writing this fic as well!! ; w ; Kichie, you will ALWAYS be one of the people who make me most happy and I'm grateful to have you in my life a l w a y s . I cannot stress enough how happy this fic makes me, but I hope that you know this effusive praise is genuine and completely because I enjoyed the fic from start to finish!!!!!! キチは最高だああああああああああ―　本当にほん～とうにありがとうございます、妹ちゃんやん！！　\(*A*)/