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[topnote]

so, basically this is some good old-fashioned first-time!fic. really! it’s that simple. other key points: set pre-injury, nick’s lovely fiancée isn’t in this specific picture, and aaron ramsey is adorable. i think that should be all of it.

slosh around loose
aaron ramsey/nicklas bendtner, nc-17, 3262 words

Comments

[ferrassie]

thank you! i tend to worry about whether my shorter sentences have enough impact to say what they should say. so, i appreciate the feedback. :D

[vicky86x]

this was HOT! Really good work :) it`s easy to follow Aarons train of thought and I like how you use the flashbacks :) as I said, good work, hope you continue writing!

Thanks for sharing :)

[ferrassie]

those were the two things that i really wanted to come across strongly; i'm glad that they did. thank you very much!

[winter_solstice]

I love the way you wrote that! :D

[ferrassie]

thank you kindly, hon!

[littlesumo]

I want to be Aaron! And I don't even fancy Nick. :) But this is just so awesome

Meming straight away

[ferrassie]

personally, i'd just like to stare at aaron. nick is totally optional. but, i'm glad you liked it! ♥

[nahco3]

love this. it's beautifully written, I absolutely adore your writing style.

[ferrassie]

thank you! i'm always trying to find a balance between the sort of inane and the pretty, ahaha.