Heroes- Alike in Word.

[top_hatted_girl]

Title: Alike in Word.
Author: top_hatted_girl .
Rating: PG-13.
Pairing: Mohinder/Sylar. Implied Matt/Mohinder.
Spoilers: Through the finale of season two.
Warnings: Strongly implied sexual situations.
Summary: Words, even ones that mean nothing when read, carry a heavy weight with them. Especially for these two.
Disclaimer: I own very little of this and do

Comments

[etoiledunord]

Oh, yay!! Thank you so much for writing this! =D

I like the idea that meanings and/or solutions can be found like that. Kind of like second-guessing what all the parts add up to. The last section is especially great. I didn't even think of that anagram. The whole thing is rather sad, from their unpleasant childhoods through to wanting an needing what they had, but can't have any more.

Ironically enough, this has made me quite happy. ^_^

[top_hatted_girl]

Well, I'm glad you're pleased, as the story is for thou. And I'm glad you enjoyed the idea. (At first, I had No Freaking Idea what I was going to do with the prompt. It was terrifying.)

[incaseineedyou]

So I don't even watch heroes, and this intruiged me. That's such a cool idea. I keep rereading the last section because it gave me chills.

[top_hatted_girl]

*gasp* You caught me writing fanfiction again. But it was for a fic exchange, I swear... And I'm glad you liked it. Even though you don't have the context. ;D

[bonniesrg]

Ahhh this is so sweet and sad. Poor Momo can't get his Sylar of his mind.

[top_hatted_girl]

Pleased am I that you enjoyed it.

[bonniesrg]

Uh...Yoda?:P

[widestance75]

This is a great example of why I didn't sign up for the challenge and can't write for prompts. WTH would I do with the prompt "anagram" except sit and stare at it in frustration? :)

This was AMAZING and all the more amazing because of the use of the prompt. Really really lovely and haunting.

Great job!

[top_hatted_girl]

Aw, thanks so much. It means a lot.

[levitatethis]

If it's possible to fall in love with a story I think I'm head over heels. This is...first I have to say a huge thanks to etoile_dunard for such an excellent prompt because what you've written is simply beautiful.

I adore the play on words that marks their passage from childhood to adulthood, most importantly to each other - it's like some very specific puzzle that only they know has bound them all this time and yet neither knew (until they met) that there was another player in the game.

I love how the words from each section reveal something to each of them. men rots...Oh, remind...o, you veil...Return...

And I just about imploded at turning What I need into He I wanted. What works in each section (and is striking in the last one) is how each creation of a new word(s) reveals the thinking process of each man. So in the last section you show Mohinder being both resistant and then understanding with resignation

[top_hatted_girl]

Gosh, thanks so much for reading. I... don't know what to say, but understand that I am boundlessly grateful for your thoughtful review.