Comments | took_skye: Hotch's 5 Stages...Part 1&2 of 5

took_skye

Hotch's 5 Stages...Part 1&2 of 5

Oct 10, 2009 19:32

The first two parts to "sequel" to my 5 Stages... fic focusing on Hotch. (When done may submit to criminal_prompt too.) The Denial Stage is the same as in 5 Stages... so, if you've read that, feel free to skip it, haha! The rest, though, will be totally new!

Denial:

( The truth that makes men free is for the most part the truth which men prefer not to hear. ~ Herbert Agar )

brave new worlds, fanfiction, hotch/prentiss, het, criminal minds

Comments 6

underspell102 October 11 2009, 05:08:38 UTC

Naturally he was furious at Foyet, what he’d done and how much it pleased him to do it, and the nature of a world that could form such a creature into being.

^This is awesome. I can totally imagine Hotch thinking it.

I really liked that you added the part about the penny at the end. Can't wait to read the next parts!

took_skye October 11 2009, 14:06:16 UTC

Aw, thank you! I thought it was rather Hotch-like myself. :D Haha, yeah, I wanted Hotch to, well, think of himself in the "nerd" group...not in the least because thinking of Reid was way to easy, you know? Haha! ;D

kimmeke_86 October 11 2009, 10:31:28 UTC

I loved both parts. Enjoyed reading it very much! There are a lot of moments I just loved. To name a few:

Then he watched in shock as lights about the bullpen began to flicker back on, leaving a path of safe travel to the kitchen. “Hello?” He voice came out stern…except for that underlying shakiness of his nerves betraying him.
Just the fact that he is scared in an FBI building, says so much. I love that Morgan immediatly waves, so Hotch can see him. I'm sure it is because he heard the shakiness in his voice.

“I’m fine,” Hotch knee-jerked before looking down a little in slight embarrassment that those two words were the first he could even think of these days and recall a more suitable response.
Just that those are the first two words that he can think off...

Hands slipped from the railing fast, as if the metal burned suddenly, and Hotch straightened up as his colleague climbed the steps towards him.
Just love the writing here!!

Instead the senior agent hit the wall by the doorframe and slid down, tiny particles of his clothing ( ... )

took_skye October 11 2009, 14:13:03 UTC

Wow! I'm so glad you like so much of it, haha! And thanks for pointing them out, it helps me know what works. :D Please stay tuned for the other stages - Bargaining, Depression, and Acceptance! :D

ladybugg7 October 12 2009, 01:06:56 UTC

Ha.... I love it! It's nice to see Hotch getting Angry over what happened. You write so exact to the characters, I can so hear and see Hotch/Morgan and Hotch/Prentiss. I love at the end where Emily says. "I'm a nerd." "You're in good company." So Cuute!! (Yes, it needed an extra 'U' added in there. lol)

took_skye October 12 2009, 13:32:25 UTC

I'm so glad you liked this, haha! And thank you very much, that's very kind of you to say....I'm trying to keep Hotch, um, Hotch while he goes through the stages, I'm glad I seem to be succeeding. Haha, well thank you very much for the extra 'U', I'm glad it was that cute. ;-)