Ill Judgment [FanFic]

Sep 11, 2010 18:40

Title: Ill Judgment
Author: Tooks
Pairing: Hotch/Reid
Rating: FRT
Summary: Judgments can be very wrong, even between those close.
Notes: This is AU but there are Season 5 spoilers!! Part 5 of my "Breaking the Bonds" series...it's been a LONG time coming (sorry!!), I hope it's at least mildly worth it.

Judge a man by his questions rather than by his answers ~ Voltaire )

breaking the bonds, slash, hotch/reid, fanfiction, criminal minds

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Beaaauuuuuuuuuuuuuuutiful :D screaming_kick September 11 2010, 22:56:11 UTC
You make me so happy <3 I love this fic so so so so so SOOOOO MUCH! :D *dances with* You are amaaaaaaaaaazing :D

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Re: Beaaauuuuuuuuuuuuuuutiful :D took_skye September 11 2010, 23:05:44 UTC
Haha, wow, you found and read that fast, didn't you? Well I'm really glad you enjoyed it so much. Hopefully this will be the start of some more consistent writing, haha! :D

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daylyn September 12 2010, 02:50:49 UTC
Great update. I quite like the discussion about Reid's "type" (and how Hotch wasn't "it"... although I have some hope that Reid's mind will change). I also liked how you portray Hotch's mood swings and withdrawal symptoms. Looking forward to more.

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took_skye September 12 2010, 12:05:15 UTC
Thanks! Only took forever, huh? Haha! Ah, well, see how Reid presumes Hotch is (all the things that made the guy not his "type") might not really be true - Hotch may surprise Reid like Reid's surprised him - hence the ending quote, haha! Heck Hotch may surprise himself, haha!

Yeah, the withdrawal symptoms as a whole are hard to write sometimes but I like them - they serve a major purpose (and will continue to) in the story and in getting these two closer. ...I just hope I can pull it off in the end, haha! Thanks so much for the feedback, I'm glad people are still reading this, haha! :D

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bowie28 September 12 2010, 03:27:34 UTC
So happy to see an update. Hope there'll be more soon. :)

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took_skye September 12 2010, 12:09:45 UTC
So happy to see people might actually have stuck with this story, hahaha! There should be, I'm totally feeling this pairing right now and woke up with possible openings for the chapter/piece in my head this morning...all good signs, haha!

Thanks so much for commenting, it means a lot to know people are still reading this story despite the long break - gives me the push to keep it up too, haha! :D

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paradayto September 12 2010, 17:22:39 UTC
It really is an interesting story so far!!

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took_skye September 12 2010, 17:35:20 UTC
Thanks! It's totally new territory for me (I usually write het fanfic) so, haha, I'm glad people like it. ...Makes me think I might actually be able to write this in a believable and enjoyable to read way, haha! Thanks again for the comment and stay tuned! :D

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beatrice_otter September 12 2010, 23:57:43 UTC
I like the way you're handling this; I was so glad to see the next chapter posted.

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took_skye September 13 2010, 12:45:45 UTC
Thank you! Haha, I'm so glad the end of this piece came to me so quickly and the next piece is coming almost as quickly (which means it may be posted in this week), haha! I'm glad you're enjoying the story, please stay tuned for more. :D

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