Twenty Years [FanFic]

Mar 03, 2010 18:28

Title: Twenty Years
Author: Tooks
Pairing: Jack/Cassidy
Rating: FRT
Summary: A now grown Jack Hotchner unknowingly meets someone from his father's past
Notes: You can look at this as an epilogue for "Suffer the Children" (it contains a now grown OFC from that story) or as the first in a varied number of AU pieces set 20 years in the future from ( Read more... )

jack/cassidy, 20 to life, fanfiction, criminal minds

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citymusings March 4 2010, 01:27:01 UTC
I like this fic very much! I would love to see more of Jack/Cassidy. (hint, hint) I loooove Matthew Gideon's names for the their significance. The brotherly camaraderie was wonderful. I like the contrasting can't-stop-staring bits they each had and the playful teasing with Jack.

Wonderful job, dear!

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took_skye March 4 2010, 12:44:16 UTC
Yay, people like it, haha! I knew Matthew was going to be the other boy's first name (just had to be with Emily as his mom), Gideon came after almost naturally. Haha, yeah, they're good brothers, even if there's some teasing going on - only natural, right? ;-)

Thanks, I'm so glad you think so! (Other thoughts for pieces are already in my head so, haha, keep an eye out!) :D

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citymusings March 4 2010, 18:39:07 UTC
Of course. Brotherly love FTW. ;P It's just so perfect.

YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!! Please excuse me while I squee. I hope it didn't hurt your ears!

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took_skye March 4 2010, 18:48:27 UTC
Haha, word!! ...And, haha, later Matt'll get to tease Jack about Cassidy, haha!! :D I'm so glad you think so! :D

LMAO!!! It's okay, I'm just happy I could make a person squee! Heehee! :D

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let_it_linger21 March 4 2010, 05:44:37 UTC
A beginning for one of the new series already! Way to go! I'm definitely on board for reading this one. Wonderful set up and very illustrated!

And oh, the days of being a freshman and hearing the teachers make comments to the immature boys...brings back some memories.

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took_skye March 4 2010, 12:47:31 UTC
Haha, I had this story in my head for sometime as, at least, an epilogue so that helped, haha! Now that I see people will read and seem to like this series I'll write more. :D

Haha! I remember the teen boys staring at the nudes and such too and thought it'd be kinda funny to add in...and help in showing where Matt (and Jack) were in girl-interest-development if that makes sense, haha! :D

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_nextboldmove_ March 8 2010, 17:12:09 UTC
Oooo…count me in as interested for more! This was beautifully sappy and also hintingly dark. I like it ;) Thanks for sharing!

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took_skye March 8 2010, 17:50:37 UTC
Haha, I'm glad to hear that! (I wasn't sure if people would want to follow with adult!Jack and a handful of new characters, haha!) Haha, yeah, I seem to always have a hint of darkness even in the fluff - can't help myself, I like an edge, haha! Glad others enjoy it too! :D Thank you for the comment and being interested in more.

...All stories in this AU will be tagged "20 to Life" and, so far, there are three total (this and 2 others). Feedback and suggestions are always welcome and appreciated!! :D

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