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Jun 03, 2008 16:59

Title: No Man's Land or A Really Terrible Idea
Author: lilallisun
Rating: PG (a couple swears)
Author's Notes: Some dialogue because these two are a whole lot of fun. :D Reviews would be greatly appreciated!

( I’ve told you a million damn times I don’t like it when you have plans. Get rid of them. Stop making them. Move in with me. )

author:lilallisun, fanfic:pg

Comments 20

ellensama June 3 2008, 21:10:44 UTC

Aww just lovely I love his not so smooth hinting.

wickedandcruel June 3 2008, 21:29:56 UTC

awww i thought it was super well done. I loved the conversation.

katernater June 3 2008, 21:51:43 UTC

The voices for these two were pitch-perfect. Excellent job.

alsaurusrex June 3 2008, 21:56:37 UTC

Thank you!

Also, major icon love. :)

wm_law2003 June 4 2008, 00:59:52 UTC

Second this!! Great job- I could hear RDJ and GP in my head.

schmoo999 June 3 2008, 22:38:51 UTC

This was awesome. :) Thank you for letting us all read!

jezunya June 3 2008, 23:57:24 UTC

Haha, this was awesome. This line made me laugh: “What’d I say? Move in? I was kidding. It was a joke, obviously. Haha, funny; seriously, sell your apartment.” XD