Fix fanfiction...please...

[tonksandremus]

“Do you like these?” Alice asked me twisting her leg around so I could see the strappy heels she was wearing.

“Yeah, they’re cute.” I replied.

“Do you really like them? I mean, really?” she continued.

“Yes Alice, I really like them!” I said. She flashed me a big smile.

“Good, then you won’t mind me buying them for you.” Damn. I’d fallen right

Comments

[kitkat12891]

Yay an update!!!
It's so weird to think of Edward having to use the bathroom lol. That must be so annoying for him!
Keep up the great work! =D

[tonksandremus]

I'm betting that it is. Imagine for not doing it for almost a century and then all of a sudden...

I remembered that was something humans did a lot of, so I had to throw it in.

[kevysgurl]

Wow! Super excited there was finally an up-date. I love where you take the story every time. Awesome job and can't wait for more!

[aliceinforks]

Aweeeeesome!

[von_bear]

I reallly hope they enjoy him being human a bit longer befroe they decide what to do... like what's a drunk edward like? hahaha