Comments | tongzhiai: kibum spaaaam.

tongzhiai

kibum spaaaam.

Oct 07, 2007 15:38

Last part.

underlined, part III: family
kibum/donghae, pg-13, ~600 words. it's like, introspective. or tries to be.

( family )

pairing: kibum/donghae, character: donghae, character: kibum

Comments 31

comicbookending October 7 2007, 13:58:20 UTC

It is amazingly new and different for "if, then" statements in fics to NOT be completed. Usually a character is wondering about all the "what if"s in his past and there is angst, and "...and if Super Junior was a family, but Super Junior is a family, and there really needn't be anything to add to that, or to change it." is a great line and idea.

The whole of Underlined was a pleasure to read. I love your characterizations.

“Get fucking over it,” Heechul tells him. “You have a bigger room now.”

But it's not his room.

So true in lots of things in life.

tongzhiai October 7 2007, 14:58:45 UTC

I like to believe in Super Junior unity and especially it lasting.. It's not a strong likelyhood that it does last a really long time but regardless, I like to believe in it. Thank you, glad you liked the line.

Aww, tad angsty that line there. Kibum gets over it, luckily. :)

coyotecolored October 7 2007, 14:06:14 UTC

this was an amazing, deep look at Kibum in all his awkwardness--not to mention the dynamics of the Han(Jay)HeeBum apartment. the little touches and 'minor' details give it such a feeling of reality... I really enjoyed reading it. ^^

tongzhiai October 7 2007, 15:08:14 UTC

Aw, Kibum awkwardness rocks my world. And yeah, I love imagining their little apartment and the interview clips of Hank and Heechul and Kibum and Heechul.. Just really touching, they seem so ordinary and close, stuff like that just makes me feel all warm inside. :)

Thank you!

happiestwhen October 7 2007, 14:16:03 UTC

The last section makes me just about explode with glee!!! OT13 :((((( I really wish I had an icon of Kibum's giant smile right now.

tongzhiai October 7 2007, 15:09:11 UTC

I wish I had an mp3 of his awkward laugh.

OT13 indeeeeeeed.

taylormercury October 7 2007, 15:27:02 UTC

I really, really enjoyed reading all three parts of this. I love Kibum, and I love how this was a look into him and his character and his awkwardness and everything. And I love how each part had little focuses on the friendships/relationships, all of the KiChul killed me, bff's indeed! And, okay, there wasn't really much KiHae but what was there was lovely to have had.

It was a really good look into Kibum, I think. And I adore the last line in this part, adoooore. This was such a pleasure to read, it really was, thank you for sharing!

tongzhiai October 7 2007, 15:57:42 UTC

KiChul is special, I love them. Sadly just in their BFF-y form, I can't really imagine them as a romantic pairing.

Thank you!

she_devil666 October 7 2007, 18:21:25 UTC

Sometimes the members joke that in pictures, Kibum often looks like he doesn't want to be there. He does look like that often doesn't he? He face looks like he could care less if he was there or not but I'm sure he's glad that they drag him along.

I loved 'Underlined'! I loved reading about Kibum being awkward in his ways because he often acts awkwardly and I find it much too cute.

tongzhiai October 8 2007, 10:06:48 UTC

I have that joke with my friends, "Again Kibum looks like 'what the hell am I doing here with these people'.." When he doesn't say anything in interviews often he appears like the only sane person in the group. Poor him! But really it's just his style of posing. His thing. I do not mind it.

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.