QOTD

Jan 13, 2009 20:58

A belly button
The linty center of soul
why not call it chi

--Stelley. I goddamn love my guild.

Eta:
Ponder the navel
Source of life itself
this must be chi

--Shalkai. I still goddamn love my guild.

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macaroniandtuna January 14 2009, 01:31:26 UTC
The second and third lines of the second one are both one syllable short. :D

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tolkienkookad January 14 2009, 02:12:21 UTC
Isn't 5, 5, 4 an alternate haiku sequence?

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macaroniandtuna January 14 2009, 03:05:20 UTC
Maybe, I dunno. The only alternate I'm aware of is (I think) 797.

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