Author: Azalais Title: Now Dance All Together Source: The Hobbit crossed with LoTR Appendices Characters: Legolas, OC Rating: G Disclaimer: Middle-earth belongs to Tolkien and his heirs: I wander there for fun, not profit
Sometimes I can bang out more-or-less 100 words first go - I've been drabbling long enough now that my fingers must know roughly how many lines I get! - but this would easily have been a longer scene. I had to cut out description ruthlessly. I'm glad it still holds together.
Exactly it. I'm glad that worked for you. I had a mental image of the warriors' dance as almost like the whirling of dervishes, inducing a trance-like state in which an Elf might well have visions.
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What a fascinating and strange vision for him! A marvelous use of the prompt.
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- Erulisse (one L)
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Exactly it. I'm glad that worked for you. I had a mental image of the warriors' dance as almost like the whirling of dervishes, inducing a trance-like state in which an Elf might well have visions.
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It is, isn't it? I've seen some lovely fics comparing the dancing styles of Elves and Dwarves, which is probably where this idea came from...
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