Decoration challenge: Glitter: Candlelight: Stars - 'Golden Flower' a drabble trio

Dec 30, 2016 18:20

Title: 'Golden Flower' a trio of drabbles
Author: Kortirion
Character: Glorfindel
Rating: G
Source: First Age... & Third Age?
Disclaimer: The original work is Tolkien's - this is mere speculation.

Golden Flower )

challenge: decoration: stars, challenge: decoration: glitter, character: glorfindel, author: kortirion, challenge: decoration: candlelight

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shirebound December 30 2016, 19:42:15 UTC
Oh my. This imagery is beautiful.

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kortirion January 4 2017, 00:38:36 UTC
Thank you!

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engarian December 30 2016, 20:45:44 UTC
A really nice approach to this. I enjoyed reading this very much!

- Erulisse (one L)

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kortirion January 4 2017, 00:39:25 UTC
Thanks very much, I'm pleased you liked it.

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curiouswombat December 30 2016, 21:04:37 UTC
Beautiful. Heart-wrenching in places too - just right.

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kortirion January 4 2017, 00:40:32 UTC
Thanks - a touch of melancholy for the turn of the year! ;-)

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foxrafer December 31 2016, 15:13:45 UTC
Carefully, he filled his senses, making each particle of himself sensitive to this moment, storing it away in memory…
When his eyes opened, the glitter was moonlight flashing off mail-clad backs

I love how abruptly we're also torn from the dream. All of these are beautifully done.

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kortirion January 4 2017, 00:41:45 UTC
Thanks very much, I'm pleased you enjoyed them

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hhimring January 4 2017, 19:26:13 UTC
I already liked the first one, by itself, very much (I think those are the mountains around Gondolin?) and it's really subtle how the transition works after that and ends with that last question.

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kortirion January 17 2017, 01:41:19 UTC
Thanks! And yes, the mountains are Gondolin's, before his fall into Mandos' Halls.

It's only reviewing the last few sets of drabbles I realise Glorfindel has proved quite popular of late!

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