Petrology Challenge; Marble. The Song.

Aug 31, 2013 16:47

Title: The Song
Challenge; Marble
Author: Curiouswombat
Characters: Fellowship.
Rating: G
Source: LotR

Disclaimer: The characters in this story do not belong to me, but are being used for amusement only, and all rights remain with the estate of JRR Tolkien.

The Song )

author: curiouswombat

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shirebound August 31 2013, 18:13:46 UTC
I suspect young hots saw and learned a great deal during their stay in Rivendell. :)

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curiouswombat August 31 2013, 18:26:07 UTC
I'm sure you are right - but Gimli would worry about them anyway!

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shirebound August 31 2013, 18:29:11 UTC
Goodness, I meant to type 'hobbits', of course.

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curiouswombat August 31 2013, 19:37:53 UTC
I know - I read what you meant...

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elenbarathi August 31 2013, 18:21:14 UTC
Yay, lascivious Elven statuary! Hey, but as cute as the young hobbits are, and as lusty as the girls of the Shire are, they've probably seen as much already - and very likely think the Elves are too skinny to be sexy anyhow.

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curiouswombat August 31 2013, 18:30:09 UTC
they've probably seen as much already

Absolutely. I think it is more Gimli's own sense of modesty and 'correctness' that is the problem, rather than the innocence of hobbits.

Although I think you are quite right - the hobbits would probably not think of scantily clad elves as all that exciting, anyway.

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elenbarathi September 1 2013, 07:44:55 UTC
Sorry for deleted post; I forgot that posts with links get marked as spam. I said:

Dwarven lads don't grow up with a passle of sisters and female cousins, the way hobbit boys do - what with the dwarven women being so rare, probably nobody ever sees them undressed but their mothers and their husbands.

"Diamond of Long Cleve, now there's a proper lass, sweet and juicy as a sun-ripe pear - none of your pale, cold sticks of marble."

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curiouswombat September 1 2013, 09:58:03 UTC
Yes - dwarven lasses are a mystery to all - including the lads...

Due to the vagaries of LJ I got the original comment e-mailed to me - and yes she is certainly sweet and juicy and not at all a cold stick of marble.

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lindahoyland August 31 2013, 19:28:54 UTC
A great use of the aria and so very Boromir and Gondor.

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curiouswombat August 31 2013, 19:39:20 UTC
Thank you. The prompt brought it to mind and I couldn't get past it - so it took me a while to work out just how to use it until it struck me how very Boromir the words were, but also how to involve the others.

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jay_of_lasgalen August 31 2013, 21:19:07 UTC
Oh, that's great. I can picture Boromir in his marble halls, and he was certainly Denethor's hope and pride ;/

I love that Legolas also reflects on his ancestral name - my favourite elf is too often overlooked!

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curiouswombat August 31 2013, 22:40:29 UTC
That verse really suits Boromir, doesn't it?

I would never forget our favourite elf - and I think that there are similarities between Boromir and Legolas that so often go un-noticed - including that high ancestral name!

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azalaisdep August 31 2013, 21:25:34 UTC
That was all rather melancholy to begin with - I was glad you lightened the tone at the end! (Though I rather agree that the Hobbits would probably be less shocked than Gimli would feel they ought to be ;-) )

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curiouswombat August 31 2013, 22:44:49 UTC
You know me - I like to put the odd serious moment here and there. The song was in my brain from almost when I first saw the prompt - but, oddly enough, your post with the statue sort of helped me get it to come together!

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azalaisdep September 1 2013, 07:11:12 UTC
Thank goodness poor Gimli didn't have to contend with any marble goats!!

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curiouswombat September 1 2013, 09:45:38 UTC
No - certainly something much simpler. I dread to think what he would have made of the goat!

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