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[tokyomew_sues]

Five year old sisters are annoying. Really.

Rating: Two Kirema Anima - A Pain
Title: Hikari Mew Mew
Suethor Author: Starsky Chan (Where's Hutch?)
Name(s): Shirogane Yuzu, Haruko Chiyu, Mina Arakawa, bonus Stu named Uchiha Kumo *headdesk*, Weifa, Kureipu and Mafin
Species: All human except Mafin, Weifa and Kureipu are aliens.
Hair color: Yuzu has blonde

Comments

[_monteh_]

LMAO.

Starsky here (By the way, Hutch moved away 2 years ago :B). Don't worry, I'm not going to bite off your head off because you gave HMM a bad review. I'm going to look at this as a...good criticism :D;;.

But DAMN, I wasn't expecting this XD. *goes to get rid of Japanese, because everyone seems to hate it*

[selene_moon]

Don't get rid of all of it. Maybe the words, like "hai," and all, but "mou" and the honorifics should stay in.

And YEEESSSSS! I have found your ffn account! *Goes off to add you to her watch list*

[_monteh_]

All the "hai"s are gone :B. Mou is still in, and honorifics are still in, too.

YAY! I need your account too, though! D:

[selene_moon]

fanfiction.net/~Dimensionkayt

That's the eay URL, and it'll never change, since I like being DKayt.

[tokyomew_sues]

Your fic isn't bad like some on here recently.

Well, you saw your mistake and you have the sense to correct it.

Nice Jiraiya and Naruto icon BTW.

[_monteh_]

Thats good to hear. When I came here, and saw the review, I thought "Is HikaMew that sueish and bad? o_o;".

But I guess it could've gotten rated worse..

Thank you <3 I lurve Jiraiya *___*.