Comments | tohoginka32: [Req; SHINee]Crossing Lines 1/3

tohoginka32

[Req; SHINee]Crossing Lines 1/3

Sep 10, 2010 03:28

( Jonghyun finds Taemin’s smile somewhat adorable when he’s intoxicated. Not that Taemin was ever not adorable. But it was different. He felt different, which was weird because everything was the same. Jonghyun suddenly feels compelled to place a finger on the corner of Taemin’s mouth, where his smile ends. So he does. With the tip of his forefinger, ever so slightly, he touches the small indent, the hint of a dimple lining the corner of Taemin’s lips. He sees how Taemin tenses, how his eyes round up in question then he feels foolish. )

jongtae!, shinee!, !request

Comments 8

konna_chan September 9 2010, 20:30:34 UTC

SPOT!!!!

oooo JongTae is my fav shinee couple!!!!!!!!i'll definitely read this once i have time!!(exams suck!!i haven't even been able to read and comment on the last chap of BDR TT____TT)

tohoginka32 September 9 2010, 20:47:29 UTC

All yours :) I LOVE JONGTAE too like you wouldnt believe. Read whenever you feel like it. :)

au_astronomer September 10 2010, 00:53:22 UTC

ONE DAY IMMA OWN TIME DIFFERENCES
thank you & love you♥
brb

au_astronomer September 10 2010, 01:05:46 UTC

Omgosh the last scene is so wrong and right but perfect
and *cough* krystal really taemin? really? blehheh~
TAEMIN'S BLURY SHAKY HALF UNCONSCIOUS state from alcohol IS LOVE
so very very cute
this fic is so very precious thank you so much :)
and you deserve every comment from everyone cause your fics capture hearts. no joke.
♥

(part2igo)

tohoginka32 September 10 2010, 06:47:58 UTC

There just something about the Jung sisters that just makes me want to make them evil in a none threatening way LOL
Taemin is too adorable. He really is.
AND I AM GLAD YOU ENJOYED THIS. :)

bopeep_achu September 11 2010, 16:15:07 UTC

CONTINUE NOW D8 D8 D8!!!!!!
CAUSE I SAID SO!
and taeminnie krystal is not worth your likings DX<
>:I

Jonghyun is :D :D //biased

tohoginka32 September 11 2010, 16:40:37 UTC

LOL just click next. I provided links for the next parts. Only 3 parts to this :D

u wont probably read this but commenting anyway XD miss_meian November 27 2010, 20:25:33 UTC

Kibum is slurring his words, speaking about the waiters’ uniform in the bar they came from.
what else?? XD omg how can a man be such a fashionitsa? haha

“I know how to handle…

handles.”
XDDDD

and Jonghyun wonders if they’ll be able to get home safe with Jinki’s clearly alcohol driven state when he was clumsy enough sober.
OMO XDDD NOOO
dont drive omg XDD i dont think I would allow Jinki a drivers licence haha XD

it’s about time our Taeminie learns about the ways of the world.
this really sounds like Key...but then when they did it he will go up all 'WHY DO YOU CORRPUT MY CHILD??' XD

“And you’re only now figuring out that you should never listen to me?”
Omo this so fits to me as well XDD

waving at Key who ignored him because he was still caught in a heated argument with Minho.
I smell some Minkey... omg too much fanfics got me biased to this couple even though I ship Jongkey to death.
Mhh But the fact that I love every SHINee couple let me tolerate it XDD

Kibum practically peed in his pants in excitement.XDDDDDDDDDDDDDD OMG ( ... )