Backward beta chapter three

[43sunsets]

Updated May 11, 16, 2005

Hi all :-)

Here's the “published” Chapter three, keeping in mind trixiegogobunny, tabigarasu and rea_saint’s beta-ing comments and suggestions.
(BTW, I’ve changed one sentence in Chapter two: The headmaster had appointed Hogwarts Potions Master, instead of the Deputy Headmistress, to meet a high-ranking French wizard to discuss possible ties between

Comments

[allara]

"So." I fought the urge to raise my eyebrow. "You come from another planet?"

???

[43sunsets]

Hhm, I think I'm sticking with this:

"So you," I enunciated slowly, "came from another planet?"

(This way it's still 1000 words. LOL.)

Thanks for the input :-)

[allara]

mkay :)

RIGHT, the whole 1000 words thing.... XD

[43sunsets]

*g* Yes. I'm such a word count nazi. It's my journalism background.

[allara]

;P