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Fic: Most Loved (Sirius/Lucius, Sirius/Regulus), NC17

Sep 14, 2006 17:27

Title: Most Loved
Author: kabeyk
Pairing: Sirius/Lucius, Sirius/Regulus
Rating: NC17
Warnings: Sirius is sixteen, and Regulus only fifteen, so a bit chan-ish. And incestuous, clearly.
Words: 8,000+
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Notes: Prompt 64: Lucius/Sirius - Lucius has something Sirius wants or needs, perhaps a book that will help with the Animagi ( Read more... )

Comments 58

mysid September 14 2006, 18:06:17 UTC

I don't know where to begin, this was so amazingly sad and twisted and believable. I love the idea of Sirius leaving to protect Regulus from himself. Of course it didn't do much good; Lucius has no such qualms.

Your Regulus is marvelous. I like the way he walks a fine line between being "the good son" and a disobedient copy of Sirius. And he's so in love with Sirius. You really pulled off making him seem "straight except for Sirius," which is quite difficult to make plausible.

And I loved this line: "'James lets me, sometimes. But he likes girls, really.' He sounds a little wistful." THAT speaks volumes.

kabeyk September 14 2006, 22:23:22 UTC

he's so in love with Sirius

Yeah. Normally I'm not so good with slash incest, scares me a bit, but writing this never really felt wrong, because Regulus did just worship Sirius. Possibly that makes it sicker, but I think it's sweet, in a twisted sort of way.

Have to get the Sirius/James in there somewhere!

Thank you for reading, glad you liked it.x

fleshdress September 14 2006, 18:07:30 UTC

Oooh, I don't know what to fangirl most about this. It's all just gorgeous and hot and terribly wrong and I love your Reg but there's something utterly delicious about your Lucius too.

You. I shall fangirl you most about this. :)

kabeyk September 14 2006, 22:28:06 UTC

Really? There's hardly any Lucius in there, because I just couldn't write him, well, not directly anyway. He scares me; he's a real grown-up. :D

Aw, you're lervely.x

dramaphile September 14 2006, 18:56:29 UTC

Oh

Am sort of speechless after that.

Just- wow. Gorgeous and perfect and new and exactly right.

Perhaps I will come back and be more coherent later...

kabeyk September 14 2006, 22:32:22 UTC

Aw, thank you darling.

And long, you missed off long; it's been ages since I wrote something this long, heh.

Love.x

pir8fancier September 14 2006, 19:39:20 UTC

Stupendous. Absolutely stupendous and I abhore incest fic. Usually. But this. God, you're the best.

kabeyk September 14 2006, 22:35:25 UTC

Heh. You are lovely. So much love for you.x

Slash incest scares me too (but not het, for some reason), but this one just never felt wrong.

Thank you thank you.x

pir8fancier September 15 2006, 00:25:02 UTC

It takes a lot of writing balls to do a story like this. I have recced it with approprpiate warnings in my LJ, but it would be a crying shame if this didn't find a large audience. I love fiction like this. Fiction that takes the reader out of their comfort zone. I have to be honest with you, if a lesser author had written it, I would have looked at the pairings and given it a miss. But with you, I knew it'd be good. That you know what you're doing. Even given those "givens," I think this is exceptionally fine writing. The ending is effing perfect. How the ENTIRE story sets it up. Gah! Fangirling you big time.

kabeyk September 15 2006, 09:03:18 UTC

I always feel like there are loads of people in fandom that aren't very scared by incest (or not Blackcest anyway, because the whole pureblood family set-up is so inbred and incestuous anyway), possibly too many people, because incest should always be an uncomfortable read, really. (As well as child molesting, which, really, is what Lucius is doing to Sirius, and sanctioned by his parents too.)

Usually, I get scared by slash incest, and this is the first time I've written a long piece like this including it.

Heh, I did wonder if putting that ending in was too obvious, or even if I could let it be assumed, as everyone knows Regulus was a Death Eater. But I did it anyway!

Thank you so much, you are always so lovely to me.x

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roz_morgan September 14 2006, 21:41:38 UTC

I love you so much! It was my prompt and I'm so deliughted you picked it up and ran withit because this is just amazing. I loved Regulus's voice through the whole thing - how he was so jealous and so confused and how he never seemed to think it was odd that he wanted Sirius.

kabeyk September 14 2006, 22:49:51 UTC

I did cheat the prompt a bit, seeing that I had the idea for this fic ages ago, but choosing that prompt forced me to write it and it changed a lot since the first idea (which was actually Sirius' POV and a hell of a lot shorter).

how he never seemed to think it was odd that he wanted Sirius

Heh, yeah.

Aw, I'm so glad you liked it.x