Comments | todefinebeauty: The Fine Art of Sel-Ca (Kyuhyun/Sungmin)

todefinebeauty

The Fine Art of Sel-Ca (Kyuhyun/Sungmin)

Jul 06, 2009 21:43

Kyuhyun/Sungmin (Super Junior)
PG for nothing naughty or explicit; just love (and lovin' at the most implicit you could possibly get).

( The reason why Sungmin and Kyuhyun don't seem to take pictures together. )

rating: pg, fandom: super junior, length: one-shot (1000-5000), pairing: kyuhyun/sungmin

Comments 70

thundersquall July 7 2009, 05:30:06 UTC

SPOTTING, SPOTTING OMG.

thundersquall July 7 2009, 05:49:32 UTC

I THINK I QUITE FRANKLY CRIED A LITTLE AT THE SHEER BEAUTY OF THIS LITTLE FICLET (and it is little, too little, not enough for me, Kai, you and the gorgeous spare imagery you weave).

I - oh God, I read it THREE times and I don't even know how to tell you how much I love this. Words fail me, completely. It's so beautiful, the way you write, how is this even possible? And how you write KyuMin, it's just so THEM. Sungmin is ready and willing to whip out a digital camera and pull a suitable expression, peace sign included. And although Kyuhyun isn't too much of a fan of taking pictures of himself, he's relatively apathetic about the whole business, and wouldn't say no to Sungmin - this, so perfect, what a wonderful portrayal of them ( ... )

todefinebeauty July 7 2009, 15:45:58 UTC

Okay I already talked to you online but T_________T your long comment probably makes me a little too happy. *TACKLEHUGS YOU TO DEATH, REALLY*

Honestly, this was going to be even shorter, like 500 words or something... but you know me and my need to just KEEP WRITING and turn things into absolute monsters so it got a little out of hand (also, I enjoyed writing drowsing!Kyuhyun too much).

a;slkdjfs;lkjfd cavities, I think I gave them to myself just writing this. THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU, really, *keysmashes in enthusiasm*

The last paragraph is how I feel about the two of them, sort of, and really how I see them being. That sense of sweetness and slight possessiveness and an almost bittersweet acknowledgement of what is real between them and for them, in the future.

THUNDERSQUALL, FLUFFY KYUMIN, HWAITING~~ haha, omg my cheesiness, I could have it for breakfast right now.

(your HTML and commenting fail is adorable XD *HUGS YOU!* okay, I'm really going to go eat now :3)

shiryu_yugure July 7 2009, 05:36:26 UTC

SPOT NOW BECAUSE MY MOM IS CHASING ME OFF AFJKLALF.

shiryu_yugure July 8 2009, 02:46:58 UTC

Bwee, I love this! (But it's your writing so I have yet to see an exception to that, haha XD). I swear I squealed out loud at the image of this entire scene multiple times, it was so languid and soft and Sungmin's possessiveness of the photos killed me.

TUMMY-RUBBING. This is so easy to see and kfajfa asleep before the phone's backlight even shuts off, I can't tell you how much I love your imagery and details no matter how many times I read.

And Sungmin's thoughts! The little wondering bit about the dreams is so thought-provoking and for Kyuhyun to be wondering that with Sungmin there is beautiful (I had to backspace about five times to finally get that right lol).

Just capturing the moment and then thinking forward suddenly makes my heart break a lot more for Kyumin a bit when SJ-M's in China, aw D: But at least there's the photos and the memories here for them. ♥♥♥ *sticks into memories with the others*

todefinebeauty July 8 2009, 16:20:49 UTC

I love tummy-rubbing :3 and all those little intimate gestures - I really wanted it to have that sleepy, soft, natural loving atmosphere in that scene so I'm happy you liked it! And I'm glad you liked the dreams part too, I liked writing it XDDD Snarky-magnae!Kyu seems too level-headed to have thoughts like those, but I think in a drowsy, loving sleepiness, that OOC-ness could be likely.

SJ-M in China does make me D:! at the inevitability of their separation... but yes, photos and memories always help!

aslkdjf and thank you for the mem and your lovely comment dear ♥

_ellebasi_ July 7 2009, 05:51:50 UTC

you made me fall in-love with Sungminnie more ♥ and OMG Kyu. O.O KyuMin. OTP.

todefinebeauty July 7 2009, 15:02:23 UTC

Aww, yay! Sungmin could always use more love. KyuMin have been on my mind a lot lately, they're becoming one of my OTPs as well :D

ryutakay July 7 2009, 05:53:20 UTC

Aaaw this was really cute!
I was completely obsessed with WonKyu and Qmi these days, but i can feel the KyuMin love making a party in my heart, swimming in rainbows and flowers, and its probably loving every moment of it lol hummmm I really missed the KyuMin sweetness ~ Thank you so much for this amazing fic! I missed reading such a sweet fic about them ^^

todefinebeauty July 7 2009, 15:08:14 UTC

Haha thanks for your comment! I'm glad I could jump-start the KyuMin party in your heart (sounds cute, with the rainbows and flowers :P) - I've missed seeing KyuMin as well, but maybe it's because I haven't been looking too hard, haha.

rocketdiary July 7 2009, 06:24:04 UTC

THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL IT RIVALS HEECHUL.
The last paragraph killed me. Omg ilu, seriously.
You just like, made my year. ♥
*mems*

todefinebeauty July 7 2009, 15:10:48 UTC

Heechul, even? :O Haha, thank you for the sweet comment and the mem ♥ Also, icon! ...but yours is prettier XD