Fic: Dead, But Not Forgotten 3/3, Kensi/Deeks, NC-17

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Title: Dead, But Not Forgotten
Author(s): fringedweller
Fandom(s): NCIS:LA
Pairing(s): Kensi/Deeks
Word Count: 26,742
Rating/Warnings: NC-17, death of non-canon character
Beta: seren_ccdDisclaimer: Not my characters, no money being made, blah blah blah

Comments

[fringedweller]

Thank you!

[missalee]

This was so, so good! You are so amazingly talented at writing a very tight story, with a great plot, believable things that happen, spot on character portrayal, and a fantastic eye for detail. I feel like I could be watching this play out on screen it's so well done. Really fantastic, and long too! There are so few long Kensi/Deeks fics and yours are just outstanding.

[fringedweller]

Thank you very much!

Yay!

[danakate]

I finally had some time to properly read this. Bravo! You are amazing at having a nice plot and story and doing the research to make it better! Your Kensi/Deeks dynamic is awesome and spot on. You have their voices down pat...and the rest of the team, too!

(Oddly enough, my former-SEAL friend also never suffers from hangovers, no matter how much he drinks. I giggled when I read that in your story. ;)

Oh, and I liked the fact that Nell was the one who instigated the whole thing. We're seeing more of her devilish personality this season and there are hints of it last season, too. (And, yes, I enjoyed the part about her flirting with Eric and Callen, hee!)

Who knew Hetty was such a scheming matchmaker!

Bravo again! :D

Re: Yay!

[fringedweller]

Thank you!

[leanstein]

Um, I maaaay not watch the show but I read this and really REALLY enjoyed it. You are such an amazing writer. Great pacing, and great dialogue. :DDD

[fringedweller]

Oh, watch the show! It's so good, much better now than the original.

[lil_cupcake_03]

this was a great story all around :)