Fic: In the Beginning

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Title In the Beginning
Author To-Shiki
Rating R
Pairing Steve/Gail, future Steve/Tony
Word Count 8,573
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Re: Interesting idea

[to_shiki]

'Ello! Yes, I will be continuing this one...sometime >_< Everything's all packed up for moving back to the dorms so it'll be at least a week or so until I can get back to it and my other Avengers fics. And yes, it is a prequel to all the others that I've done and I'm even working on the -last- fic for it (of which I will prolly cry like a little girl). That and I've been working on my JRock fics as well. As to what was done to Tony, let's just say that I've spent too long looking up and staring at diagrams about the male reproductive system.

I think half the problem at the time with Jazzypom's comment was that I was completely unaware that Gail was only from the Ultimates universe. So that was making thing's very annoying, I'm sure.

Everything that's been said is going to be used to rewrite the whole thing. After reading the comments, then sitting back and looking it over again, I can see how things are off, characters are ooc despite the difference in what's happened in their lives up to this point. Lol my beta's the one who pointed out that there was no background on the characters. The story was supposed to open up right where Cap and Tony were captured. Made me go, "oh crap, she's right!"