Those Sad Eyes (Weren't Made For You) PG-13 (Edward/Bella)

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Title: Those Sad Eyes (Weren’t Made For You)
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Comments

[flute_genevive]

Simply wonderful. You've totally captured the essence of both Jacob/Bella and Edward/Bella. I loved it.

[xrikkstar]

Beautiful.

Don't usually like the use of "you" as a narrator, but this was extremely effective, loved it. I felt incredibly close to the story.

Thank you for that :)

[gypsy_sally]

Glad to see you back in action, my dear.

And this is a beautiful fic, which doesn't surprise me at all.

[bubbadoghouse]

That was beautiful. I needed that today. Thanks so much for sharing your beautiful writing.

[bangbangebony]

Wow. This was THE MOST beautiful fic I've read in a long long time. It was ephereally real, yet fantastically dream-like. Awesome. I LOVEEED IT. :D