I'm very glad you like it. I was afraid this story was a little boring because it's part of a bigger universe, but it is what it is. At least it's entertaining. ;)
Thank you! I'm *so* glad you liked the story and didn't mind too much that the ultimate ending is still not clear. This is only one story in a whole universe that I'm creating around this timeline so they'll be more stories to pick up on all the hanging threads.
Thanks again. Your extremely kind words make me want to rush and finish a new story, which is always a great feeling. :)
Alfred, who had betrayed him I just wanted to pause for a second and ponder the delicious possibilities and universes opened up by that one little clause.
Bwahaha. :) You're the only one who noticed it so far ( or at least has bothered to say anything about it). I really want to do something significant with Alfred. I'd like to play on the fact that at one point, Alfred had his own comic. Plus, I think he's entirely too supportive of Bruce's craziness...
In the end, he is told everything and asked to promise only one thing: that he will find some measure of joy in his life despite the pain.
*dances* This is great, just great, perfect, wonderful. I love this dream, with the constrast between the black and white and the blue, all the foreshadowing and import.
When will you learn? He is mine. Always.
Yep. I love the certitude of this part, the feeling that from the past echoing forward everything clicks inevitably into place, try as Clark or Bruce or anyone else might to keep it from happening sometimes. And I love the wry and defiant mix of "When will you learn?" as well.
Like I said in my pep talk to vipers_in_love in part 1 (it was hardly a comment, I just broke out the pompoms, lol), this story works so wonderfully moving backward in time and forward in confidence...but then the confidence echoes forward again to past the beginning of the story, into the future's future that we haven't seen yet. It's like a ripple that goes backward and hits a wall, and somehow that turns it into a wave
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Sasha, you're killing me with the "I don't write" thing. I write a lot. :) Really, I do. :) You just don't appreciate me. LOL
Thanks so much for your comments. I decided to make my own universe :) so there will definitely be more of this story coming soon. And it *will* all end happily...one day. :)
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Thanks again. Your extremely kind words make me want to rush and finish a new story, which is always a great feeling. :)
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I just wanted to pause for a second and ponder the delicious possibilities and universes opened up by that one little clause.
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He had his own comic book... hrm... this requires greater investigation.
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*dances* This is great, just great, perfect, wonderful. I love this dream, with the constrast between the black and white and the blue, all the foreshadowing and import.
When will you learn? He is mine. Always.
Yep. I love the certitude of this part, the feeling that from the past echoing forward everything clicks inevitably into place, try as Clark or Bruce or anyone else might to keep it from happening sometimes. And I love the wry and defiant mix of "When will you learn?" as well.
Like I said in my pep talk to vipers_in_love in part 1 (it was hardly a comment, I just broke out the pompoms, lol), this story works so wonderfully moving backward in time and forward in confidence...but then the confidence echoes forward again to past the beginning of the story, into the future's future that we haven't seen yet. It's like a ripple that goes backward and hits a wall, and somehow that turns it into a wave ( ... )
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I'm glad you did. :)
You managed to get everything I ever intended this story to be, Jen. That is *so* cool. :)
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Thanks so much for your comments. I decided to make my own universe :) so there will definitely be more of this story coming soon. And it *will* all end happily...one day. :)
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