Fic: Double Helix (Clark/Oliver) 2/10

[tmelange]

Title: Double Helix -- 2/10
Author: tmelange
Date: October 2007
Fandom: Smallville
Pairing: Clark/Oliver
Rating: Adult
Warnings: Slash. Scenes of stylized nonconsensual sex between males.
Word Count: 4,081
Previous Chapters: HERE
Series: Between an Arrow and a Target
Status: WIP
Summary: Oliver gets pulled into an escalating situation with two

Comments

[greeneyelove]

You SO rock!

But I want more! This is great. Poor Ollie is so confused and it seems Clark is too.

[tmelange]

Thanks, dear! I'm struggling to find my purpose with this story, but I want to say I've finished one more installment in this universe before the end of the year, so I'm trying to press on. :) Thank you so much for reading and commenting.

[anonymous]

Poor Clarks going to explode. And Poor Ollie he really doesnt deserve to be treated that way.

[xinsidemyskinx]

That was me sorry lol

[tmelange]

LOL, I was wondering. :) Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

[ladybugkay]

I haven't had a chance to read this, yet, but I was so happy you updated I just had to say: 2 of 10? What?!

I'm ecstatic that there will be that much more to read and enjoy, but that also means more waiting? Aaargh. But I still love you. (I'll comment again once I have the time to read this.) :)

[tmelange]

I'm hoping to move little quicker with this story. Maybe...I'll even have the next chapter up tonight...;)

[svgurl]

10 parts instead of two? I am definitely not complaining. :D

This a fantastic chapter. You've captured both Clark and Ollie so well. I'm just in awe of your amazing writing abilities. I feel so bad for Ollie though . . . poor guy is confused. But I think Clark is pretty messed up too.

Hopefully Oliver will be able to get Clark to open up. Or at least I hope Chloe is more successful. She's always a good start. :D

Excellent chapter! Thanks for the update. And I hope you don't mind me adding this to my clark/ollie list? :)

[tmelange]

I'm still struggling to get a feel for the Ollie/Clark dynamic I want to portray. Ollie is so close to a Bruce Wayne characterization that I'm finding it a little hard to capture a unique dynamic. I'll be happy when Ollie shows back up on SV to give me more fodder.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, dearest. I do very much appreciate it. :))

>>And I hope you don't mind me adding this to my clark/ollie list?

Add away! I appreciate the pimpage.

[boltgirl426]

This was just simply amazing. Such unbelievable descriptions and emotions coursing through our favorite heroes. You've done an incredible and amazing job! Can't wait to read more!!!

[tmelange]

Thank you! I want to pick up the pace with this story. Hopefully, I'll have another chapter up tonight.

You are a doll to leave such kind comments. :)