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Fic: Captain Becker's Zombie Apocalypse

Apr 02, 2011 16:07

Title: Captain Becker's Zombie Apocalypse
Fandom: Primeval

Summary: In which Connor has an upcoming birthday, and Becker doesn't buy any apples.

Characters: Becker/Connor
Rating: PG
Length: ~3500
Beta: fredbassett

Author's Notes: Written for explodedpen's birthday back in December, and which I've finally got around to posting with her kind permission.

( Captain Becker's Zombie Apocalypse )

!fanfiction, tv: primeval

Comments 39

taricha April 2 2011, 15:26:36 UTC

This was so cute. I loved the argument about who would win in a fight!

tli April 2 2011, 17:40:06 UTC

Thank you!

lady_drace April 2 2011, 15:39:53 UTC

Aaaawwww, this was SO much fun!

Favorite lines include:

[...]'boyfriend' seemed too serious for what pretty much amounted to a handful of kisses and gropes in between rips in time and space that occasionally spat out dinosaurs and other creatures[...]
Aaawww. "kinda boyfriends" are my favorite kind!

Similarly, 'friend' was too casual and impersonal to cover the squishy feelings that Becker felt in his stomach every time Connor got excited about something.
Squishy! Becker, such a sweetie!

“I could kiss you for that! Not now, though, obviously. Later?”
Oh, Connor. You nailed him. So much.

In a fight, who do you reckon would win - Gimli or Paul Atreides?
Only Connor. Honestly. *rofl*

Becker spent three days up to his balls in freezing cold water as part of what Major Ryan liked to call 'team bonding'.

All the other lads and ladies of the ARC's Special Forces contingent liked to call it 'death by assault course'.Aaaww, poor Becker. And the whole team, basically. Good thing he has Connor to warm him up ( ... )

tli April 2 2011, 17:40:37 UTC

Thank you very much for the feedback! Glad to hear you enjoyed it ;)

lukadreaming April 2 2011, 16:17:52 UTC

Soooo much fun! I liked Connor's descriptions of his past birthdays -- and the who'd win in a fight conversation!

tli April 2 2011, 17:41:20 UTC

Thank you!

jaynedoll April 2 2011, 16:34:20 UTC

I loved that. The line about Clinton's Cards was definitely my favourite *g*

tli April 2 2011, 17:41:41 UTC

Thanks! That's still one of my favourite lines, too.

telperion_15 April 2 2011, 16:53:59 UTC

*giggles* That was awesome, and the text message conversation was a thing of utter joy!

tli April 2 2011, 17:42:12 UTC

Thank you!