Fic: Never Judge a Horse by its Color 2/?

[tkeylasunset]

Title: Never Judge a Horse by its Color 2/?
Rating: NC-17
Characters: Steve/Danny
Summary: This is an Hawaii Five-0 Old West AU, with horses and everything! In which Danny is a Detective and Steve is a fugitive from justice. (But not necessarily an outlaw, if you know what I mean.)
Words: this part ~4100
Warnings/Notes: I was going to participate

Comments

[thtwzjustadream]

Oh my. :). I'm really enjoying this even though I'm not usually much into western themes. There are a couple of spots where I'd change the phrasing to avoid modern phrases - if you want suggestions, let me know and I'll email them. It's fun, this story, and I like the whole Butch and Sundance feel of it a lot. Looking forward to the next chapter.

[tkeylasunset]

Thank you for the lovely comment!

I was afraid anachronisms would sneak in. I tried to be vigilant against them. If you'd send them to me, I'll make sure I don't repeat those mistakes. And maybe you'd be willing to proofread the next chapter? You know, once I have it written.

My email is tkeylasunset at yahoo dot com.

Thanks again!

[thtwzjustadream]

Sure! I'd be glad to - and then I get to read it first. :). Will email you.

[kaige68]

I LOVE THIS!

I LOVE YOU!

I LOVE COWBOY PORN!

HAPPY WEDNESDAY!

THERE IS NOT CAPSLOCK ENOUGH!!!!!

[tkeylasunset]

THANK YOU BB!!!!

:-)

LOOK THAT

[mcdanno_isa]

Hey babe, I saw this on Tumblr!!reminds me You and this history

http://25.media.tumblr.com/bc3dfee8910b86a7088324280a110c05/tumblr_ml5zne245D1rx8dkvo1_500.jpg

source:http://tapko.tumblr.com/post/47814188865/i-like-au-ok-d

LUV

Re: LOOK THAT

[tkeylasunset]

Amazing isn't it!!! Great minds think alike!!

Thanks for pointing it out to me!!!

<3