FIC: The Foreseen Wife (8/8)

Sep 15, 2013 22:39

Title: The Foreseen Wife
Rating: T (with a DVD extra rated MA)
Author: Read more... )

rating = t, ten, rose tyler, doctor/donna, donna, doctor who, sarah jane smith, bas_math_girl, handy, jack harkness, ficverse = foreseen wife, river song, birthdays

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dm12 September 16 2013, 16:11:24 UTC
This was a great present for BMG, one we could all enjoy!

One baby a year?!? Usually when popping them out like that, it's every other year to allow for nursing and recovery. It does seem that way, but she did have a couple of sets of twins there, right?

Nice to see Jenny and the Meta-crisis added into the mix; it could get interesting with those two.

And Sarah Jane got rewarded for finding Donna in the first place; youth and Jack, now that's an interesting combination! Lovely that Donna, too, got a life extension and will now remain fertile for at least a hundred years. That's a lot of children, but the population was in crisis, so it's needed, along with her wise, strong leadership. And of course the Doctor is very happy with that. I'd imagine, once the Curse was smashed, he really got with the program! After all, that's one long list of things he simply must try with Donna.

Lastly, it was so sweet how Donna and the Duchess got along so well, and the babies! As for Rose, it seems she has finally grown up and realized that she should take her fate with grace, and that Donna truly was the perfect match for the Doctor, they had a wonderful family, they were very happy, even if they were extremely busy, and Rose had no right to interfere with that.

Well done, and I am really looking forward to the DVD. They apparently did a lot of talking as well as the other stuff, so it should be a fascinating look at how they get to know each other so well that they can banter easily when they finally exited the TARDIS.

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tkel_paris September 16 2013, 21:40:10 UTC
Yay! A long review! I love long reviews. :DDDDDD And presents that everyone can enjoy are the best.

Well, it would look that way to Rose. And yes, two twin sets are in there. Donna might not like having children so close together, but I think she thought about it and decided that easing the population crisis was paramount. Besides, who better to manage being a hands-on parent while still holding down a job than Donna (Noble) Lungbarrow? (No way was I hyphenating that!)

Yes, my muse started thinking about the missing scenes and what would happen because of the changes. Naturally I thought of Jenny and then Handy. And thanks to my beta, the implication made its way into the story. At least TM kept me under control here so I could keep this to eight chapters and the DVD extra. But... that doesn't mean I won't want to revisit those moments Muse thought of.

Yes, Sarah Jane's reward. Took me a few drafts before I realized she deserved one. Thankfully, my beta had an inspired idea. And River doesn't know the full extent of the extensions. So... let's just say Donna will be fertile even longer than that. ;D And she'll be okay with that in the end. May space the children out more in the future, but still make loads of Time Tots. Oh, yes, the Doctor was a convert. Big time. :DDDDDD And I imagine he's now a big brother a few times over.

Thank you. Many times over. Keep your eyes open for the DVD extra.

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dm12 September 17 2013, 16:00:41 UTC
[And River doesn't know the full extent of the extensions. So... let's just say Donna will be fertile even longer than that. ;D And she'll be okay with that in the end. May space the children out more in the future, but still make loads of Time Tots.] Just lovely! A ton of Time Tots, and Donna around for a very very long time; just what the Doctor needs. They are so good for each other.

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