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The Belted Doctor, Chapter 17

May 21, 2011 06:52

Title: The Belted Doctor, Chapter 17

Author: tkel_paris , aka KendraC

Rating: High T, borderline M for (very) naughty humor, and some hints... Consider yourself warned.

Summary: A crack!fic inspired by a line from “Robin Hood: Men in Tights” and run for its life with. The Doctor is left with a very uncomfortable “protection” against unwanted advances. But will ( Read more... )

rating = t, ten, rose tyler, mickey smith, doctor/donna, donna, doctor who, sarah jane smith, martha jones, ficverse = thebelteddoctor, fanfic, handy, jack harkness, jenny

Comments 5

ext_2713573 April 3 2015, 20:29:48 UTC

I loved everything about this chapter. Especially the Doctor arguing for Rose's execution. The only reason I'm not upset that she didn't die is because of how much more that would have devastated Jackie.

Martha is right. She was to hard on the Doctor. He never said or acted like he was in love with her. Even with taking 1913, 1969 and walking the Earth into account.

tkel_paris April 6 2015, 21:24:48 UTC

But it all depends on how well Rose handles things. If she resists they will execute her. So... my aim was to leave things a bit ambiguous.

Still, he didn't treat her with the respect he should have back then. So she's still semi-justified. At least in some of her harshness.

ext_2713573 April 7 2015, 02:58:35 UTC

I agree that he deserved some of what she said to him. Especially because of the comment he made in the Shakespeare episode about how Rose would have come up with something to solve the mystery already. I just think she took it a little too far.

helloprilly December 28 2015, 01:59:47 UTC

A much better resolution to Journeys end though I do almost feel sorry for Rose. Not often that happens for me. He really was a complete idiot with regards to her and I guess it could be expected she would have projected more onto him then he had actually felt. Still she did rip through multiple realities with no thought to the consequences and his reactions to her apearance here were FAR more in line with how he should have reacted instead of the pathetic lovesick run he did in the actual episode. Well done and I am happy it didn't end a few chapters ago!!

tkel_paris December 28 2015, 05:21:04 UTC

Well, it's not the cruelest I've ever been to her. I can think of punishments I preferred to this. Being left behind to suffer the consequences of leaving Jackie behind and having to get a job would've been far more of a punishment. Which I did to her more than once. The first story in one of the series I'm posting for right now is one of them. *evil grin*

Yes, Rose wasn't needed in Series 4. At all. Someone else could've saved Wilfred and Sylvia.