FIC: The Noble Girl: Jenny (2/6)

[tkel_paris]

Title: Jenny
Series: The Noble Girl - A New Who Rewrite
Rating: T
Author: tkel_paris
Summary: The lives of a blonde teenage shop girl and her boyfriend are transformed forever when someone called the Doctor saves her life. Only...the girl isn't Rose Tyler. Written for cassikat's birthday.
Disclaimer: Hugely AU. So no, I own nothing.
Dedication: cassikat, of course. Happy birthday

Comments

[bas_math_girl]

I absolutely adore how you write Jenny; she had every attribute I could possibly hope for her. And Wilf is as brilliant as ever. :D

[tkel_paris]

Yay! :DDD So you liked what I borrowed from to create the Jenny and Wilf moment? His nicknames for her? :D

[cassikat]

Yay! *bounce!* I loved this! Jenny and her whole family were just perfect (even if I still dislike Sylvia, she's still actually expressing softer emotions) And Mickey, adorable :D

[tkel_paris]

I love long reviews. :D Well, Sylvia takes some getting used to. I hope to redeem her through this series. :)

Yes, she needed that talk and she knew it. Yes, shame on the lack of medicinal hugs. :( But that couldn't be helped. And yes, Jenny could never brush off her mother's concern - she's smart enough to comprehend why her family would be protective, and caring enough to not want to cause pain. And you know she's been struggling to balance that with her own need for independence. And yes, that was brushing off, but she needs to regroup first.

I wanted Mickey to come off as wholly concerned about her. Did it work? :) Ah, that will be explained later... Be patient, grasshopper. :D

Next chapter will answer the question of Jenny's middle name. Did you like 'Trouble the Younger' as a nickname? :D

Heh, heh, heh! Wish I could take full credit for that idea... but it's fitting, isn't it? :DDDD (And yes, Jackie wouldn't say 'no' enough to Rose, and that's why she let herself be brushed off. Her and Mickey.)

It's up! :D

[cassikat]

Jenny's a good kid, and grounded enough to know that she needs the support. Doesn't so much want the overprotectiveness, but she's a teenager and teens the world over think they know better. Until they get their noses rubbed in it. Usually. :P

Oh, he was concerned, I could tell that. I just wish he'd stuck a bit longer, maybe actually gotten her highly-sugared tea instead of the alcohol. But he did make her smile as he was leaving, and that's good :) Oh drat, more waiting. Buuut it wouldn't be so much fun to find out if you just told me, so I'll wait :)

Dammit, have to wait five minutes to finish this till I can go read the next chapter! *pout* Yeah, I loved 'Trouble the Younger'! Like I said, it made me spit-take! :D

Oh, very fitting! :D Even if you borrowed or stole the idea ;D (Yeah, that was half of Rose's trouble right there - no one ever said no to her and enforced it.)

[tkel_paris]

And sometimes, not even then. Example is She-Who-Doesn't-Exist-Here. :)

I'd never thought of Mickey and Jenny as a pairing until I got this idea. I'm surprised by how well I think it works. :)

"Trouble the Younger" will make appearances here and there. I can feel it. :D

Yeah, no danger of that here. Four people who would be able to tell her "no" and follow through on it. :)

[docdonna]

oh man...the Doctor's gonna FREAK when he sees all the Noble females butting heads and trying to boss him around.*snickers

[docdonna]

I meant I had a snicker when I read that her mom had a sonic toothbrush. definitely tired

[tkel_paris]

It's okay. I figured out what you meant - although I blinked when I first read it. (In my defense, I was tired from going to a wedding - which was a lot of fun.)

[tkel_paris]

*snorts* Next chapter, but I believe you've already seen it. :P

Again, next chapter.

How many kids like to imitate their elders? Besides, it was probably really cute when she was little and looking like a tiny blonde angel. I figure that's why Wilf didn't mind. :D

You'll see. :)

As I told cassikat in an answer to an earlier comment, I'd never even thought of this pairing until I had the idea for this series. So yeah, they have a strong foundation already. :)

Will answer that later on. When the time feels right.

You will have your answers later on. Be patient. :)

[yellow_craion]

*squee* I love this family dynamic. Can't wait to see Wilf have that talk with Nine :D

Oh, I forgot to ask - did she really audition to play Rose? I didn't know that!

[tkel_paris]

That's what I've been informed. She's the right age in chronological and appearance terms. Of course, we wouldn't have the lovable Jenny. *sighs*