FIC: The Noble Girl: Jenny (1/6)

[tkel_paris]

Title: Jenny
Series: The Noble Girl - A New Who Rewrite
Rating: T
Author: tkel_paris
Summary: The lives of a blonde teenage shop girl and her boyfriend are transformed forever when someone called the Doctor saves her life. Only...the girl isn't Rose Tyler. Written for cassikat's birthday.
Disclaimer: Hugely AU. So no, I own nothing.
Dedication: cassikat, of course. Happy birthday

Comments

[tkel_paris]

Aw... *hugs* My birthday this year included a networking meeting, a job interview, and taking my mom to a doctor's appointment. Did at least go buy myself some nice things, and went out to join a friend's celebration party. Hope the rains go away.

I knew you'd love it as soon as I thought of it. *hugs back* I was chomping at the bit to know what you thought of this and tardis-mole's pressie for you. :D

Hey, now that you've done the commenting, you can tell me how Jenny makes the episode so much better by making comparisons. You can do that with each "episode" and chapter. :D

Yeah, Jenny was an inspiration to Donna to do better, to make something of herself no matter what. And she did just that. Jenny is so proud of her mum. Can you tell that yet? :D

She treats Mickeys far better, eh? :DDDD

It WAS short in canon! And No-Name was SO annoying and stupid in it! Believe me, I'm so enjoying seeing how much of a difference a change in characters makes. :D And note that she knew what they were back in the day. :D

More coming, as soon as I've double-checked something in "Rose" for accuracy's sake. :D My connections could be a bit uncertain soon - although I'm taking my computer with me, there'll be about two days where I'm not sure how much I'll be able to access the Net. Will try to post daily, Squee. :D

[cassikat]

Sounds like we both had horrible stuff getting in the way of our celebrating *hug* And it's now official - the only things that saved my birthday were the presents :) Especially yours and TM's :D

Well, all Donna really needed was a reason to stop listening to her mother putting her down. So here she has Jenny, really spurring her on cos she wants to be a good mother. :)

Yeah, she treats Mickey better. :D (of course a rock could've treated Mickey better than Rose did...)

I'll just add comments as asides to compare and contrast, starting with next chapter :D I'd take up too much space redoing it here ;) (Although I will say, after I got over being annoyed at other RL stuff, I went and rewatched 'Rose' last night, and this opener ranks so far over the other that it's impossible to compare ;) Oh, but she was an idiot, wasn't she?)

Yeah, I know it was short, but Jenny's more persistent - I'd have thought it would be longer. Ah well, the Doctor really did have to get on with blowing up Henricks, didn't he? :P And Jenny noticed the TARDIS! *hee!*

*huggle* I'm off for next chapter - you have fun on your trip, and I'll promise not to mind if you miss a couple of days :D *hug!*

(oh yes - *squee!* *snoopydance* =D)