The Doctor needed some sweetness after the mess he went through last chapter, didn't he? :) And yes, I adore the twins, too. Just wait till the next chapter!
The family discussion was good. The background and all that. And I loved how Ten started to go off on Sylvia, and was cheering for it, but yeah...Donna was right to stop him for now. Time and place and all that. But I still think Sylvia needs a talking to.
Kinda a little (a lot) curious about Ten has in mind for the twins. And perhaps names for the twins. =P
JE was helpful in providing Ten's dialogue for part of the scene. After all, it was mostly original dialogue. But some things can't really be improved upon. Oh, I think he'll drop one-liner pointed comments at Sylvia every so often... ;)
They are a scary mix! That's part of what makes them so much fun to write! :D
Well, I'll be checking how to insert pictures into the next chapter. That way, I can show how I see them as looking. That's a good one for the age, but the hair doesn't stick up enough. ;)
Here's another one. Not as young, but better hair.
I've often wondered what would happen if you used one of those programs I've seen on crime dramas (where they take photos of a man and a woman and see what their resulting offspring would be) and see what the pairing of the Doctor and Donna. :D
A bit late in commenting as I'm rereading this story again ;-)
What happened to Donna's promise to spend some time in the Vortex once everyone's gone home in the last chapter? They went straight to Sylvia and Wilf after dropping everyone off.
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The family discussion was good. The background and all that. And I loved how Ten started to go off on Sylvia, and was cheering for it, but yeah...Donna was right to stop him for now. Time and place and all that. But I still think Sylvia needs a talking to.
Kinda a little (a lot) curious about Ten has in mind for the twins. And perhaps names for the twins. =P
Loved it.
~Ali♥
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JE was helpful in providing Ten's dialogue for part of the scene. After all, it was mostly original dialogue. But some things can't really be improved upon. Oh, I think he'll drop one-liner pointed comments at Sylvia every so often... ;)
Next chapter. For both. :)
Thank you! :D
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"God, they're a scary mix of the two of us, Spaceman." :D
I especially loved her calling him "Theta". I missed that on first reading (it as last last night).
I wish there was some way to find a picture of a very young Catherine Tate, to go along with this icon!
Can't wait for more!
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Well, I'll be checking how to insert pictures into the next chapter. That way, I can show how I see them as looking. That's a good one for the age, but the hair doesn't stick up enough. ;)
Thanks! :D
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Here's another one. Not as young, but better hair.
I've often wondered what would happen if you used one of those programs I've seen on crime dramas (where they take photos of a man and a woman and see what their resulting offspring would be) and see what the pairing of the Doctor and Donna. :D
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I'm sure someone has done it. You'd have to factor in a lot of possibilities - there are a lot of different results one could get. ;D
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What happened to Donna's promise to spend some time in the Vortex once everyone's gone home in the last chapter?
They went straight to Sylvia and Wilf after dropping everyone off.
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